Hannah Whatley

@xonos-darkgrate as someone who has read and reread this story, I can assure you it’s anything but simple. In many ways it’s a lot like most classical literature— the premise it’s built on is very basic, almost simple, and yet when you read the story it’s nothing you ever would have guessed.

@Daeus *sniffs* You forgot to tag me.
But looks like I’m first to the party anyway, so here goes. XD

First off, I really like it. The only suggestions I have are a few tweaks to the wording.

The first line, I think, would be better as simply ‘Trevor is in a mess. After traveling back in time, he and his sister are now…’ etc. It leaves out…[Read more]

Tags. @josiahdeboer @xonos-darkgrate @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @graciegirl @salome01w4g @epicaddie2 @catwing @that_writer_girl_99 @shannon

@that_writer_girl_99 will continue. 😉

@raevynstar *nods* Totally valid reason. 😉

@Rolena-Hatfield that’s awesome! I like the color scheme. 😀

@raevynstar heyyyyyy! I’m an INFP too. 😀 Welcome to KP; so glad to have you here. I’m a poet (of sorts 😛 ) as well. Why do you like poetry?

@xonos-darkgrate I’m sure it would. It would be cool to give a bad guy a subplot too.

@xonos-darkgrate By sub-plots, I basically mean adding in side characters with their own intertwining stories. I also mean how the main events John Huss experiences affect the many different areas of his life. For instance, you could build a subplot around a book he is writing, or a friendship he has with a small child, or a theological dilemma…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate That sounds like a great idea. You might want to read the book Trial And Triumph. It’s a novel about John Huss, and I really liked it. I would also highly recommend you read Rora. It’s a real-life story of a Waldensian resistance fighter with added details to bring it to life. It might give you some ideas, especially on how to…[Read more]

@raevynstar He sounds good to me. 😀 The one thing I would point out is that sometimes writers will make these types of characters mopey. It’s fine for characters to be sorrowful and introspective, but they must have a strong goal they are pursuing at the same time, or it will be hard to root for them.

@dragon-snapper That’s right. You got it.

Haha! You’re too quick! I just realized someone already asked you that, so I went to ask something else, but you’d already answered! hehe 🙂 Anyway, I’ve never heard of them. I’ll have to look them up!

@raevynstar Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m just venturing into the Sci-fi genre. 🙂

Do you have any pets and what’s your favorite kind of ice cream?

@raevynstar Hi Raevyn. Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet.

It’s always cool to meet other poets out there. You’ll have to share one of your pomes with us sometime.

Btw, do you know what your personality type is?

@xonos-darkgrate Yep, the narrative voice is sweet.

@Daeus don’t hesitate to poke me if I forget— I’ve got about a million things swirling around in my head lately. 😛