@daisy-torres
Active 1 year, 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Lin replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
@daisy-torres Is done! That was great! Thank you so much for sharing with us!
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
Ooooh, AWESOME!!!!!!! Did you put chapter one on here? I don’t really check the KP forum as often as I should, but if you did, I’d TOTALLY read it as soon as I’m done with reading the chapters that @e-k-seaver has put up!!!!
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Natalie C. replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
Can you please tag me? I’ve been reading this since I joined and it is so awesome! I MUST KNOW MORE
Natalie
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
Of course, anytime! 😊
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Lin replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
@daisy-torres Oo, I’ll try to get to it soon! Thanks for sharing it!
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
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*trys to say something but can’t find any words*
Daisy!!! This is even better than the last one!!! Her you-know-who shows up, then she does you-know-what to him, then her other you-know-who shows up and I’m like “this is amazing!!!” and *takes a deep breath to calm down* WOW!!!! You made me laugh out loud, too, haha!! &#…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 5 critique (last chapter) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
YAY!!! I’m so glad it’s helped you! Thanks for letting us read it ❤
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Lin replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
@daisy-torres And done! I loved it, per usual.
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Lin replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
@daisy-torres I’ll try to get to this today!
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 4 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
……… I think this was the best chapter so far…….. SOOO goooood, but really sad!! And I adore the description and suspense. You also used all 5 senses, which brought the chapter to a whole other level. The mystery, intrigue, beauty… I’m sooo ready for the next chapter!! 💛💛💛 (is that going to be the last one? that’…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
Girl, that was great!! Super fun to read, as always! 😉
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
OOO, YAY!! let me read it real quick and I’ll give you some feedback…
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Lin replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
@daisy-torres Aight I left some comments! Thanks for sharing!
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Lin replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 3 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
@daisy-torres Cool I’ll try to get to it soon!
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ella replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 2 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
I love this soooo much!! Tessa and the other characters, the internal monologue, the mirrors, the music, the prophecy… the whole concept is sooo cool!!! TYSM for sharing!!!!!!!!!
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Lin replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 2 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
@daisy-torres Ey I just read through it and left a couple comments! Thanks for sharing!
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Lin replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years ago
@daisy-torres Aw, that was beautiful!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years ago
I love that poem:) It’s so beautiful!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
This sounds awesome! (I’m a slow reader however XD ). I’ll let you know when I finish though:)
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Lin replied to the topic Smoke and Mirrors Chapter 1 critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years ago
@daisy-torres of course! Anytime!
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