@daisy-torres
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Ribbonash replied to the topic A topic where I share my cringey writing for your enjoyment. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
@daisy-torres @gracie-j @relia
Hey, these are just hilarious. XD Enjoyed reading them. But like each one is good in some way. It makes me realise how anything badly written can be fixed and made beautiful! 🙂
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Natalie C. posted an update 4 years, 9 months ago
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How is Smoke and Mirrors going? I reeeally want to know what happens!! <333 -
relia replied to the topic A topic where I share my cringey writing for your enjoyment. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
I’m going to hop on this train and provide my own cringey outlining. After 23 chapters of good, detailed stuff, this happens.
Chapter 24:
POV: TBD
Topic: walking… mebbe
And that’s literally it.
If you think you suck, remember someone always sucks more. (My own version of it could always be worse.)
@daisy-torres actually decent stuff for a…[Read more]
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Natalie C. started the topic Keep going or jump ahead? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
This is very random, but when y’all are writing and you get stuck at a scene, do you make yourself keep working on it so you stay in order? Or do you sort of jump to the next scene that interests you so you can keep up your momentum?
Adding some peoples… (also this might go through twice…)
@joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @nova21 @ribbonash [Read more]
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Natalie C. started the topic Encouragement needed in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
Hello all! I’ve been feeling really discouraged lately about my writing. It doesn’t seem very good to me, and reading other people’s amazing work doesn’t help. How do y’all get motivated when you just want to chuck it all in the garbage can (if I’m not the only one that ever wants to do that)?
@joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @nova21 @nova21 @ribbonash @joy-caroline @gracie-j @lydia-s @lewilliams @scripter-of-kingdoms @issawriter7 @daisy-torres @sparksaraabbott11 @abigail-m @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @mkfairygirl @ariel-f @elanor @jodi-maile @beth-darlene @hallie-jean…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Into His Marvelous Light in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
Hi y’all! So, wasn’t sure where to put this, but my church and I use these little bible study booklets called Into His Marvelous Light, and I wondered if anyone would be interested in being taught this Bible study? It’s simple and will give me good practice for doing it online and in my own words too. If you want to, let me know by simply replying…[Read more]
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Kathleen started the topic I DARE YOU TO… in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
I dare you to post the very last sentence you’ve wrote in a story with no context.
And no cheating!
I know it’s tempting to quickly write an eloquent sentence before participating but DON’T! Be 100% honest and post the very last sentence you wrote. (Unless there is anything inappropriate of course).
Okay, I’m going to tag some…[Read more]
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Kathleen replied to the topic My brother and I are starting a YouTube channel powered solely by socks. in the forum Film 4 years, 10 months ago
So cool! Looking forward to your first video!
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Kads posted an update 4 years, 10 months ago
@daisy-torres @issawriter7 Hey! Are you guys doing CWW this year? I signed up and I’m on Forks!🍴
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Yep, I’ve been going strong so far. Katherine’s on there, too. Almost finished with my wip!!!! EEEKK!!! *gasp* AWESOME!!! *high fives* I’m on team Forks to!!! MAY THE FORKS BE WITH YOU!!!!! XD
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ella started the topic superfun charrie development sheet that i made! in the forum Characters 4 years, 10 months ago
hiya friends!
I researched some fun ways to develop characters, and i thought some of y’all might be interested… feel free to use this, i hope it helps!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W1WFRg0dkC9FwdnjtjtsccqiUKOdx22LMlw1KKtn_F0/edit?usp=sharing
@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @keilah-h, @writerlexi1216, @nanisnook, @issawriter7, @mkfairyg…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
@lewilliams @abigail-m @daisy-torres @issawriter7 @mkfairygirl @nanisnook @anyone Wanna sprint for a little? Got a blog poem thing to write… 😛
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
@issawriter7 @mkfairygirl @daisy-torres @lewilliams @abigail-m @lydia-s @nanisnook
Is anyone writing/sprinting at the moment? I have some free time to write (and need to finish NaNo) so anyone is welcome to join me!! I’m going to begin at :10 and probably sprint for 45 minutes!! 🙂
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
Aww, THANK YOU so much!! <33333 That means so much to me!! 😀 😀 Thank you, and *gasps* you did incredible!! And I love that line, it’s so mysterious!! :O
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
@daisy-torres @writerlexi1216
Okay, I’m calling it quits tonight, too! I got 1401 words and my last line was: “Where did you go?”Oooh, Lexi, I just ADORE that message!!! It’s just soo true and I think you worded it all in an AMAZING spectacular way!!!!!!!! You’re SO welcome, girl, thank YOU for sprinting with me!!!!!
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
I guess I’m going to officially stop sprinting now, and my word count is around 1,025 words with my favorite lines being:
Newton blinked a couple of times, his thoughts ticking like a clock as he kept himself silent for a long time. He then hesitantly stuttered, “Don’t second-guess yourself, Caira. You’ve been holdi…
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
Yep, we are!!! C’mon and join us!!! The more the merrier!!!!! WOOHOO!
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Katherine replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
@issawriter7 Awesome!!! I’ll join you!!! 🙂
@nova21 @devastate-lasting @abigail-m @lewilliams @godlyfantasy12 @lydia-s @writerlexi1216 @daisy-torres @anyone-else Do you feel like sprinting for a bit?
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Katherine replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
@writerlexi1216 THANK YOU, Lexi!!!!!! 😀 <333333
@lewilliams Aw, you’re welcome!!! <3 Yes, it is always so much fun!!! 🙂 Oh, and awesome word count!!!!!!! That’s so exciting!!! Ooh, cool!!! Is The Drakesbanes your WIP?
@daisy-torres I’m sorry I missed your sprint. It looks like you wrote a lot though. Great job!!! Ooh, that snippet is so…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic OFFICIAL WRITING SPRINT LEADERBOARD in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
I got 435, favorite line is probably:
“No Anton, I did not take it up. I put it down, it bounced off the ground and sprung back up, giving me a black eye,” Mejia said and peered towards the window as if she were expecting someone to be on the other side of it.
Your line is incredible, thank you for Sprinting with me also!!:D
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<p>Hm, it won’t let me edit, anyway, a bunch of tags (that I totally did not copy and paste from another thread): <a href=){kind=link}
@nanisnook Aw, thanks for asking!!
That one is a side project that I turn to when my current WIP isn’t going that well 😂 I’m nearly finished with my current WIP though! As soon as it’s done, I’ll be working on Smoke and Mirrors full time!!
That’s great!! I’m glad you’re almost done with your current WIP, too.
Thank you!!!