@daeus
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Hannah replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Yep, not bad. last night I was on for an hour and only got 100. *face palms*
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Hannah replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Yep, not bad last night I was on for an hour and only got 100. *face palms*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus ooooooohhhhhh… ooh wow. Mm. Yes. I like. The only problem I have with that one is it does seem a little long. Any way around that, do you think?
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Hannah replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus I’m joining, I’m going to try and finish a chapter *deep-breath and wishes I had coffee*
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@epicaddie2 @daeus I must depart. Farewell!
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EpicAddie2 replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Bye for now! Never fear, I shall protect your chair with my life!
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus *valiantly draws new sword* I ate the old one. 😀 Yum.
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EpicAddie2 replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus @daughteroftheking Phew. The chair is safe from melting.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Ok, I’ll save you a seat. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus I like both Time Turns Again (*small feelz attack* IT TIES WITH THE LAST LINE YOU SEE) and The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready. The others… not so much. They just don’t fit the action feel of the story. Philosophy is all well and good (obviously, knowing me 😛 ) but the primary focus of this story, I’d say, is on the action/adventure. The…[Read more]
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EpicAddie2 replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Welcome!!
@daughteroftheking It’s fun, but also really sad. *sniffs* I feel so bad for making these characters’ lives horrible. -
NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
Hey, @daeus! Welcome!
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Snapper replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus There’s also, “Who He Was.” Not sure why I thought of that….it could apply to either the MC or the Villain. *more shrugs*
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Snapper replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Tagses!
@daeus See above.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus ehh… not quite. It sounds like one of those really old, stuffy devotional books written for children in the Victorian era.
*kicks legs and scowls at her screen* I should really think of something helpful.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Preview of the New KP Website in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Yes–I forget if I’m using that plugin or a similar one, but I’ll be using something like that on Saturday while I’m working on the changes. 🙂
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Jackson Graham replied to the topic Article Question in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 7 months ago
Thankfully, only book 1 of my series has these orcs in it. And even then, they are more than just ugly creatures with no regard for the lives of their kin (although they are certainly violent). Have you ever written any other races in your stories besides humans? By the way, I downloaded Treachery of the House of Fairwin awhile back and I…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Article Question in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 7 months ago
@warrioroftherealm Well, I don’t think that any of your readers will blame you for stereotypicalness. After all, ever since LotR, people have viewed Elves and Orcs through that lens. Personally, I find it distracting if the races are too out of range, so to speak. Definitely do what King @daeus said, and deepen the cultures, but otherwise, I don’t…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@DAEUS. What about that beyond-cool password the Watchers had amongst themselves? The gears of the world turn faster. Anything there?
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Hannah replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@catwing @emily @daeus @seekjustice @dragon-snapper @glitter-ocelot I’m writtng if anyone cares to join me
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