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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@celticcailin My email is imexinart@gmail.com and be sure to let me know who you are in the subject line.  You might send it to a few other people, though, cause I am not sure I will be much help. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@kaya-young Aw, thank you! 😀 I’m so glad you like Rin 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@skye I apologize for pelting you with questions without answering them for me too. 🙂 I am fifteen and we live in Missouri even though we are moving.  What book are you writing, and what is your main character’s name?  My book I am working on (the most prominent one anyway) is called “Mahinia”, and the main character is a girl named Mahinia.  …[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@skye Neat!  I like drawing horses and people too.  Your profile picture is cute. 🙂  Where do you live?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea Where can I find that sheet on Story Embers?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Critique for my Kinda Sorta Fantasy Novel in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@alia Wonderful!!!  😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder Okay, thank you 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@gh24682468999 This may sound ridiculous, but I get really excited about my characters when I imagine them doing stuff in moveie form. 🙂
Actually, the newly launched website storyembers.org has a downloadable character questionnaire. K. M. Weiland also has a more extensive character form she fills out. You can get that on her website,…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@gh24682468999 Also, having your MC’s personality different than your sidekicks personality can be more interesting and realistic than if they are the same. Â I guess, all of your characters will be different while always having a little of you in them too.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Critique for my Kinda Sorta Fantasy Novel in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@alia. Ooh, I love it! Â Now I want to read the whole thing!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@annaberens. Hi! Â Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! Â Do you know how to post topics and such? Â Glad you are here!
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Help!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@celticcailin Hi!  Very few of my songs turn out fit to sing. 🙂  Do you feel comfortable posting any of your songs so we can see them?  (Its totally fine if you don’t.)  Sounds like you already have some better advice anyway. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Character Development Methods in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@gh24682468999 I think my favorite thing about writing is creating my characters!  I never thought when I began writing that I would feel so close to my characters.  Sometimes I’m like, “I am so sorry I have to put you through this, my dear character, but its for the best I promise!  You will triumph in the end!”  🙂
Is it your characters per…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine 😛
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@seejustice Okay, so ya know how I said I’d start reading it tomorrow?
I finished it.
I literally put off studying for a test to read it 😛 (you should be proud and concerned) 😉
It was awesome! 🙂 I can’t wait for more.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice No problem. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice Yay! I think I should be able to start reading it tomorrow 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder Yay, thanks! 🙂 I’ll get to these as soon as I can. Enjoy your trip!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@skredder aw, thank you for reading it! 😀
I do have a question though: Jane said that I was struggling with telling instead of showing, how do you think that was in this chapter?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice Thank you for your prayers!  God has given some pretty clear direction, even though its not always been what we would have chosen. 🙂 Please do keep praying.
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