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@rochellaine  I know I’m late, but I am here now (for a little while).  🙂

Actually, I have to go. 🙁  Hopefully will be back shortly! @rochellaine

@rochellaine I meant to say characters.

@rochellaine I am working on perfecting my plot line and character for The Crimson Cup.  Are you rescuing Uncle Bill?

@rochellaine Im here!  Are you on still?

@rochellaine  Oh!  So my director adapted the story of Cinderella for the stage (she wrote the script) and she also wrote the songs since it’s a musical.  There were a few changes made to the story like Ella’s dead mother comes back and transforms her dress, instead of a fairy-godmother.  Things like that.  🙂 😉

@rochellaine @sam-kowal @seekjustice

I have another thought on singing.  I was reading in Romans this morning, and I read the part where Paul was talking about not offending other believers.  Do you think that sing “shady” songs, might cause younger, weaker believers to stumble?

@livgiordano I got them.  I cant wait to read them!

@livgiordano That would be great!  My email is imexinart@gmail.com and make sure to let me know who you are in the subject line.

😀 I was going to send you a friend request.  You beat me to it! @livgiordano

@livgiordano Yes, please post more!!  It really has helped me.  I memorized it.  I think of it all the time.  And good job getting @filewriterbase13x to join.  She’s been awesome!  Did you read The Light Triumphs?  Its the first I have submitted to KP, but you might enjoy it.

@livgiordano Oh my goodness! WOW!  Let me tell you that is one of my FAVORITE poems on planet earth!!!  I love it!  And it came at a time in my life when I really needed that.  (It was before I joined KP.)  Yeah, it was so awesome I wrote it it my diary.  And I wanna hang it on the wall.  Its so beautiful!!!

@livgiordano Are you the one who wrote the poem “Broken”!!!!????

@filewriterbase13x Okay, sure.

I think you were pretty detailed.  You could describe the room and the people’s faces a little more.

I have a good idea of the guy.  His face is not clear in my mind though.

The emotion was good.  It wouldn’t be bad if there was more though.  A few words describing it a little more would help.

I would def…[Read more]

@filewriterbase13x I like it!  Its really good!  I think its well balanced with the things you mentioned.  What era is it?  Modern?

Do you and livgiordano know eachother?

@skredder The sequel of my fantasy series.  🙂  And I actually have to go eat dinner now because I have to leave.  (I have play performances for a show of Cinderella every night this week…)  Talk to you later!

@skredder @rochellaine I’m joining for a limited amount of time… 🙂

@rochellaine Whoops!  I wish I could help you finish the dishes so you can come sooner…

@rochellaine Are you working on your western?

@skredder Haha that’s awesome! 🙂 *goes around the house saying it to family members* *laughing at their weird looks* 😛