Daeus

@sage-g @notawriter @ariella-newheart @sarah-anson

Could one or two of you possibly draw me a character, please? 🙂

Randal—is 17, has auburn hair, green-yellow eyes, and a soft smile.  He has a long white scar down the side of his neck.  Clothing-wise, anything casual, probably just a T-shirt and jeans.

Hopefully that’s enough info!  😉

@jenwriter17  @kaya-young  Thank you both so very much for putting time into commenting on this for me!  Would you like me to post the entire book here or…?

@seekjustice hmm, I couldn’t seem to find you 🙁

@seekjustice ya mind if I follow ya on Pinterest? 😉

I’ll have to hop away now. Thanks for chatting with me! I hope editing goes well. 🙂

@seekjustice yeah they do. I put a lot of importance on cover art 😉

do you know if anyone here (or if you are 😉 ) on Pinterest?

@seekjustice Oh yes, I remember now! You see, I remember covers and not titles or author names most of the time 😀

@seekjustice hmm, I haven’t noticed 😛

Yes, I’ve heard of that I think. What’s the author’s name?

@seekjustice You kinda got me hooked on retellings. At least, I realized how much I like them when I read SFI. 🙂

@seekjustice Well, I’ll definitely be one of your first customers when you get it published. 😉

@seekjustice I’m really enjoying it (sorry it’s taking me so long though). I really like Zac 😉 Do you plan to publish these two books one day?

@seekjustice Cool! I’m reading When Infinity is Empty 😉

@seekjustice You still here?

@kaya-young  Wow, thank you so much!  I can definitely post the entire book if you want.

Well, I have not completed any other full books, but the sequel to the one you’re reading now is in the works and I also have a Superhero WIP along with some short stories/novelettes.  🙂 🙂

@jenwriter17  The whole book is written, I just don’t want to overwhelm anyone with critiquing the entire story…unless you want to.  🙂

@skredder Awesome 🙂

@ingridrd *tries not to break critiquing hiatus*

*fails*

I just have to read this!!! Maybe I’ll put off the start of my hiatus until late May… is the whole book written and you’re just posting parts of it here and there, or are you still in the process of writing it?

To those of you who are interested, here are the next two chapters of the book.  I’m pretty sure the fourth chapter is kinda confusing, so if you’d give me some pointers there I’d appreciate it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-jzVzEBjTyvq5vKUBAGZ-0Lt4-_bWLJw1Uofs_59wmQ/edit

@jenwriter17 @kaya-young

Woah, no idea what happened to that first picture.  *scratches head*

And here are the pics…

So I found this the other day…

I wrote it when I was seven and the spelling is just horrible.  *facepalm*

I’ll write out the story since it’s hardly legible (and I’ll fix the spelling and grammar mistakes):

Once upon a time there lived a cat.  Now this cat was not an ordinary cat.  The cat has lost a leg.  The cat’s name was Pretty. 

There w…[Read more]