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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Arwen sounds so cool! For some reason, though, I like most names with ‘wen’ at the end, so I guess I’m just weird. The aesthetic is especially cool!😃
I’ll try a one of my not-so-human characters and a human, because I don’t have a whole lot of humans. 😅
Rina- MC for Healer
A few years (more or less) from adulthood. A Lupinari…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Also, I’d love to see more of your writing if you’re willing to share! I loved your description. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
I’m back! 🤣
This is an intro I enjoyed from a WIP that I may or may not continue.
Lori watched from the peak of Crescent Tower, looking out over her kingdom, now bright and colorful with a slight fall breeze. She knew soon it would turn to winter’s freezing chill, and cherished this moment of peace and happiness. The winter was h…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks!
Anyway, those are the main races I’ve drawn. I have Falcor and Arcanin somewhere, but can’t find them… The Falcor are pretty much talking birds, and the Arcanin are just bears with stars on their foreheads. Here’s a quick drawing of the solar system, cause I can’t find the one I drew earlier. The picture is kind of bad, but…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
It worked! Ok, I’ll do the rest now. 🤣
Can’t remember for the life of me if I showed this one of Rina already, but I’ll show her anyway…

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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh… That makes sense, then. 😅 I’ll try and see with Quelin… The picture is kind of faded, but it should be fine.

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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 1 month ago
Sounds really cool! I’ll definitely be on here later to see yours and share mine. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Unfortunately, the pictures won’t come through, but I’ll get you descriptions later!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 1 month ago
I love it! 😃
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Writing an Article? in the forum Non-Fiction 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for the advice!
Yes, I have seen a lot on writer’s block for sure, and it’s good to know to avoid outlining. While I can’t say I have a lot of experience with romance, I love worldbuilding, so that might just fit!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
No problem! Thanks!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Writing an Article? in the forum Non-Fiction 3 years, 1 month ago
Okay, thanks! I’ll have to think that over. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic Writing an Article? in the forum Non-Fiction 3 years, 1 month ago
So, I’ve been thinking about doing an article for KP, but I’m just not sure on a few things, so I figured I would ask. I’ve been told that I’m pretty okay with non-fiction stuff, so we’ll see😅.
Anyway…
What kind of articles are common or maybe overused, and which ones need to be explored more? Are there other topics you’d like to see that I…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Not trying to take over this thing lol, but I figured I’d share this. It’s the first bit on a character I’ve been working on, kind of a mystery:
A freezing wind howled through the trees, piercing Elrin’s cloak and chilling him to the bone. With the thoughts circling through his mind, he hardly noticed the cold. He was a foreigner in a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Actually… I really don’t know. 😅 Now that you mention it, it’s definitely a solar system, not a galaxy, so that was just a mistake on my part. Thanks for catching it! 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Well…hello… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 1 month ago
Nice to meet you!’
I’m Solfyre! I’m a soon-to-be highschooler, worldbuilder, guitar-player, and wolf-lover. I love bringing God subtly into my writing, and exploring aspects of Him in my worlds and characters. I don’t have any dogs (I love them, it’s just that my mom is allergic), but I do have a cat, Stripes (my brother named him…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Thanks!
They are more or less in the same orbit, though some are a little farther than others. Lupus is slightly farther, while Leor is the closest. Aavian, Arcania, and Lacertilia take their places in between the distances of Lupus and Leor.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
@thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise
@landric @anyone
Hello again! Back with chapter three of Healer. Don’t feel like you have to read it right away, but it’s here for if you’d like to. Still, any critiques are definitely welcome and appreciated! 🙂
Chapter 3
The wind is roaring now as I follow Dune, weaving through the…[Read more]
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