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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
It worked! Ok, I’ll do the rest now. 🤣
Can’t remember for the life of me if I showed this one of Rina already, but I’ll show her anyway…
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh… That makes sense, then. 😅 I’ll try and see with Quelin… The picture is kind of faded, but it should be fine.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
Sounds really cool! I’ll definitely be on here later to see yours and share mine. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Unfortunately, the pictures won’t come through, but I’ll get you descriptions later!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
I love it! 😃
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Writing an Article? in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks for the advice!
Yes, I have seen a lot on writer’s block for sure, and it’s good to know to avoid outlining. While I can’t say I have a lot of experience with romance, I love worldbuilding, so that might just fit!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
No problem! Thanks!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Writing an Article? in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay, thanks! I’ll have to think that over. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic Writing an Article? in the forum Non-Fiction 1 year, 7 months ago
So, I’ve been thinking about doing an article for KP, but I’m just not sure on a few things, so I figured I would ask. I’ve been told that I’m pretty okay with non-fiction stuff, so we’ll see😅.
Anyway…
What kind of articles are common or maybe overused, and which ones need to be explored more? Are there other topics you’d like to see that I…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Not trying to take over this thing lol, but I figured I’d share this. It’s the first bit on a character I’ve been working on, kind of a mystery:
A freezing wind howled through the trees, piercing Elrin’s cloak and chilling him to the bone. With the thoughts circling through his mind, he hardly noticed the cold. He was a foreigner in a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Actually… I really don’t know. 😅 Now that you mention it, it’s definitely a solar system, not a galaxy, so that was just a mistake on my part. Thanks for catching it! 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Well…hello… in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 7 months ago
Nice to meet you!’
I’m Solfyre! I’m a soon-to-be highschooler, worldbuilder, guitar-player, and wolf-lover. I love bringing God subtly into my writing, and exploring aspects of Him in my worlds and characters. I don’t have any dogs (I love them, it’s just that my mom is allergic), but I do have a cat, Stripes (my brother named him…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks!
They are more or less in the same orbit, though some are a little farther than others. Lupus is slightly farther, while Leor is the closest. Aavian, Arcania, and Lacertilia take their places in between the distances of Lupus and Leor.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @gwyndalf-the-wise
@landric @anyone
Hello again! Back with chapter three of Healer. Don’t feel like you have to read it right away, but it’s here for if you’d like to. Still, any critiques are definitely welcome and appreciated! 🙂
Chapter 3
The wind is roaring now as I follow Dune, weaving through the…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
You’re fine! Any help is appreciated, and you’ve never come off like that.
Also, if you ever do post a chapter of your WIP, I would love to read it and offer any advice I can!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Full honesty, I started this WIP maybe a couple months ago, so it’s not very far along yet worldbuilding-wise🤣. These are all things I’m going to have to work out. Thanks for mentioning them, because it makes things so much easier when I can have some kind of list of things to tweak or change.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
This is a great idea! I love your description! 😃
I recently had to do a string-along story in school. Basically, the title is one word, then from there the sentences grow in length. I made it a short version of a WIP I worked on when I was in… third grade? 🤣
Anyway, here it is:
Wolf
Sirius ran. Over the hills. Past the rocky…[Read more]
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