@crocheter12
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Ahaha! Maybe that’s the real trick of relationships in a story… Not exactly being all sappy, but making people smile. (lol perfectly worded I’m so trademarking that XDXD)
Yes! We are Hybridlore and Solfyre, the weird pantser duo! 🤣🤣 I might’ve mentioned this before but I love your username. Lol part of the reason I used Solfyre as…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Ooooh I should draw them together XDXD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
XDXD
Right!? lol
Lol my brainstorming process is all over the place rn. She would be another soldier helping them in their mission to free the prisoners. I always call her Naria in my head, because I randomly thought of that name and wasn’t sure where to use it (I know it sounds like Narnia but whatever XD). I picture her with dark…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yes, definitely! XD
Same! My brother always rolls his eyes at me. Whenever I’m writing a scene I like I just end up grinning for what seems like no reason lol.
Also… I’ve thought about having a love interest for Sorren. What do you think about that? It would be another Lupinari, because we can’t have everyone become halflings XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Any Ideas? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Cliffhangers are now the best proven method of motivation XD
And yes! Now Dune and Rina have to be a thing lol. One thing: I now have to learn how to write relationships… Eventually. Maybe. We’ll see XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Any Ideas? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 5 months ago
Interesting thing. The username Solfyre is based off of a couple characters. Sol is a dragon in my WIP Finding the Light. Fyre is the guardian of another realm they have to journey to in the book.
The tag KyrontheArcanin is a character in Healer, too, but to tell you who he is would be a MAJOR spoiler, so I’ll hold back XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 5 months ago
Yes, absolutely tag me! *rushes to look at poetry * XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Any Ideas? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 5 months ago
I’ve written backstory and stuff before, but I can’t say I’ve done much writing ahead. IÂ know I haven’t done any in Healer, because it would probably help.
So… I’ll definitely have to try that. 😉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Yeah, I didn’t get an email for yours either. But then again, KP has been kind of weird lately XD
Thanks so much!!! I was actually kind of worried about this chapter, so that’s awesome!
Lol I think cliffhangers are my way of forcing myself to write the next chapter, because even I want to know what happens next. XD the motivation of…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 5 months ago
Oooh the fairy tales made modern one looks cool, too… I love twists on fairy tales, but I’ve never tried them myself.
(I’ll admit, I’ve never read any Shakespeare, but the book about Mary looks cool too 🙂)
*after stalking XD* From what I’ve seen of your writing, I bet your poetry is/would be great! I don’t know…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Wow, your writing is AWESOME! The idea is really cool, and I love the names! I thought the dialogue was great, actually. And I do not know who was getting beat up in the first part, so please don’t tell me XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
NEVER played Mario??? Really? Not even once? Man, I grew up playing mario. We had the new stuff and the original Nintendo (my dad may have known every secret in the game, as it was made during his childhood XD)
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Somehow I managed not to see this until now… I’ve done that twice in the past two days! 🤦♀️
Doing well! Yeah, I know XD. I would ask you like a thousand questions, but we’ll go with just a couple lol.
What’s you WIP about? I feel like maybe I’ve heard of it (you might even have told me lol I have a terrible memory lol)…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Any Ideas? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 5 months ago
Alright!
@landric (oooh I want to read those now XD) @awsumfaith
Thanks so much for the advice!!! I’m definitely going to be working on just putting all my ideas together and then narrowing it down like that. It should at least help me figure out what I want to focus on in the story for sure.
Thanks again!!! 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic Any Ideas? in the forum Plotting 1 year, 5 months ago
I’ll just tag who I can remember right now XD
@thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @crocheter12 @hybridlore @awsumfaith @godlyfantasy12 @landric @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @everyone-i-forgot-i’m-drawing-a-blank-lol
Alright! So, the thing with plotting…
I try. I really do. But… I’m naturally a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Totally, go ahead! Some of our characters aren’t purely villains, so yours should fit fine. As far as I can tell there are a lot of antiheroes.
Oooh, I’ve seen some of Hans! XD I don’t like him obviously but he’s written well. Can’t wait to see him in the RP! 😉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Oh, cool! Yeah, I love the movie too!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 5 months ago
I hope so too!
Yes, I have a few (I get distracted lol, which is probably the hardest part of writing for me). I’ve been trying to focus more on my main WIP, Healer. It’s a sci-fi/fantasy story, kind of complicated, but it’s in the novel critiques section if you want to take a look at it. It’s in the very first draft, in a kind of…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @landric @thearcaneaxiom @i-can’t-keep-track-anymore XD
Alright! So, that ending took longer than I thought, but here’s Chapter 8! This is purely first draft as I haven’t done any kind of editing (didn’t even read through it, I never found the time). So critiques are definitely, absolutely welcome and…[Read more]
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