@corissa-maiden-of-praise
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BlueJay posted a new activity comment 8 years, 2 months ago
Thanks @winter-rose That was what I was thinking too, but I wasn’t sure that a clay jar fitted as an example, so I reworded it and I ‘think’ I’ve got it.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 8 years, 2 months ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise Thank you. (well, for her) 🙂
link I don’t know if this will work, but this is a link to her facebook page. -
BlueJay replied to the topic Take Thou Mine Hand in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Fall and Winter Goals: Writing Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! You are doomed to bliss. Dooooooooooooomed.
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Snapper started the topic Fall and Winter Goals: Writing Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Gather, fellow knights and warriors of this realm!
@Overcomer and I had an idea a little bit ago for the fall. Because summer is now over, (yay–Fall!) that means that The Awesome Summer Writing Club is no longer summery. So, without further ado, I will begin a new topic with the same principal.
We, as writer’s, will (or should, I won’t force…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Fall and Winter Goals: Writing Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Gather, fellow knights and warriors of this realm!
@Overcomer and I had an idea a little bit ago for the fall. Because summer is now over, (yay–Fall!) that means that The Awesome Summer Writing Club is no longer summery. So, without further ado, I will begin a new topic with the same principal.
We, as writer’s, will (or should, I won’t force…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Fall and Winter Goals: Writing Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Gather, fellow knights and warriors of this realm!
@Overcomer and I had an idea a little bit ago for the fall. Because summer is now over, (yay–Fall!) that means that The Awesome Summer Writing Club is no longer summery. So, without further ado, I will begin a new topic with the same principal.
We, as writer’s, will (or should, I won’t force…[Read more] -
Ingrid replied to the topic Take Thou Mine Hand in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
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Greta replied to the topic Take Thou Mine Hand in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
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I really like it! The rhyme and rhythm are really good, and I love the subject of the poem. 🙂 Keep up the great work! -
Greta replied to the topic MBTI in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@Corissa-maiden-of-praise
I’m the same way, except leaning more toward an introvert! Some days I really want to socialize and have fun socializing and other days I just want to sit in my room and read. 😛 So I guess I’m an extroverted introvert. 🙂 -
Hope Ann replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
You are lucky with your dreams, @corissa-maiden-of-praise. Mine aren’t nearly as exciting. I do dream about some books or movies on occasion, but not my own. My own ‘exciting’ dream last week had to do with my brothers getting up earlier and me trying to keep them in bed so I could have some quiet time… *smirks*
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@anna-brie @anne-of-lothlorien I’ll be praying for you guys. 🙂
@corissa-maiden-of-praise @spradlin Sorry to arrive so late, but I fully concur with the Spanish topic idea. 🙂 -
BlueJay posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
And a big thank you to all the people who brainstormed for me. I know some of you didn’t make it here before I cleared the topic, but I have figured out what to do. Grazie. 🙂
@kate-flournoy @faithdk @emma-flournoy @christi-eaton @daeus @adry_grace @alia @anna-brie @anne-of-lothlorien @hope @aratrea @clairec @spradlin @sarah-h @rolena-hatfield @jul…[Read more]-
You are most welcome, friend! 🙂 Glad you got it figured out. Happy writing!
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@spradlin 🙂 *whispers* It’s ready for beta readers now. Psst, @daeus are you interested in reading “the Golden Conch”?
How many people should I send it to in at once?-
@bluejay Yes, I am interested, but I’m a little swamped right now. I’m beta reading two other novels and Kate might send me the second piece of hers any time. Would it be alright if I postpone for a month?
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LOL! Wish I had time to do the thing. SUBMIT IT WHEN YOU’RE DONE THOUGH! cuz that’s the cool thing to do. xD
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When it’s done, it will be coming your way. But I hope you have patience cause I have a feeling it might be some time… XD
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Haha! Not a problem! Can’t wait to see it. 🙂
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@Bluejay I’d love to, but unfortunately I’m way to busy right now to take on any extra projects. Keep me on the list though. 😉 Perhaps a later draft…
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Alia replied to the topic Hi Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@bluejay @corissa-maiden-of-praise @kate-flournoy
You three better be careful or you’ll scare @ZCPeterson away -
BlueJay posted a new activity comment 8 years, 2 months ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise You’re prying! You just want to know what happens don’t you??? 😉 *suspicious stare* It gets whacked on someone’s head. *A hard head* 🙂 *sniggers*
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BlueJay replied to the topic Hi Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise I’m sorry. I’m not even going to pretend I understand you. Loony bin? Funny farm? What?
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BlueJay posted a new activity comment 8 years, 2 months ago
*grins back* Shhh…it breaks before it hits the ground. It is the good old solid wooden floor. @corissa-maiden-of-praise.
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@BlueJay Well, that changes things. *ponders* Perhaps… well, how does it break then? We must take that into account if we are to accurately describe the sound. 😉
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@corissa-maiden-of-praise You’re prying! You just want to know what happens don’t you??? 😉 *suspicious stare* It gets whacked on someone’s head. *A hard head* 🙂 *sniggers*
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Goodness, this sounds terribly exciting. I can’t wait to read it! 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Hi Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
Well since you returned the chocolate I will sympathetic. Poor @corissa-maiden-of-praise. *rubs a cool cloth on your forehead*
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BlueJay replied to the topic Hi Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@kate-flournoy That’s fantabulous that you made up a new word. *giggles*
@corissa-maiden-of-praise If you end up with a tummy ache don’t turn to me.
You see @zcpeterson We are all nuts here. *and naughty, glares at Corissa* -
BlueJay posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
Need a bit of help here. Now I don’t want to say too much because of spoilers, but HELP!
*ahem, ahem. What noise comes to your mind when you think of a shell (reasonably big) breaking and falling onto a wooden floor?
But you have to make sure that your audience doesn’t know what has happened?
@kate-flournoy @faithdk @emma-flournoy @christi-eaton @d…[Read more]-
Like shattering glass, perhaps with a duller ring to it as the wood would absorb a lot of the sound and the shell is hollow, besides.
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Hmmmm… I’d have to agree with Kate. It doesn’t quite have the tinkling resonance you’d expect from glass (because I have dropped many a glass in my days). Almost like what I’d imagine a pot shattering would sound like, if you want to use a comparison.
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You’re not the only one to drop glasses. *I managed to drop a jar of Vegemite once. It was rather a mess*
Yes, I’m wanting a comparison. Originally I had, “the sound of a thousand stones falling to the ground.” But I don’t think it would shatter like that or make that sound.
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Well, it also depends on the type of wood floor it is. Is it actual, solid wood? (unfortunately this seems to be becoming rarer, at least in my area) Or is it laminate wood floor? The sound would be different if it is.
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Oh yes, and just to clarify, it breaks after it hits the wood floor, right? The way you worded it kind of suggested it breaks before hitting… *grins mischievously*
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*grins back* Shhh…it breaks before it hits the ground. It is the good old solid wooden floor. @corissa-maiden-of-praise.
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@BlueJay Well, that changes things. *ponders* Perhaps… well, how does it break then? We must take that into account if we are to accurately describe the sound. 😉
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@corissa-maiden-of-praise You’re prying! You just want to know what happens don’t you??? 😉 *suspicious stare* It gets whacked on someone’s head. *A hard head* 🙂 *sniggers*
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Goodness, this sounds terribly exciting. I can’t wait to read it! 🙂
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@bluejay, Ahhh! This is a really hard question. I honestly can’t think of anything except what everyone else has already said, so, um, yeah! 🙂
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Thanks @winter-rose That was what I was thinking too, but I wasn’t sure that a clay jar fitted as an example, so I reworded it and I ‘think’ I’ve got it.
@corissa-maiden-of-praise Glad you think so. One day…-
@BlueJay Whenever anything is cracked over someone’s head, you can generally count on the story being exciting. 😀
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@bluejay, sounds like you’ve got it already, but I agree with the others—like pottery, just a little clearer and harder.
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@BlueJay Whenever anything is cracked over someone’s head, you can generally count on the story being exciting. 😀