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@ingridrd Sorry I never responded! I’ve been really sick.

I LOVE HER SO MUCH THANK YOUUUUU!

@celticcailin I’ve received your email! And I will add in @Jess-Penrose too so she can give her feedback as well. 😉

@Daeus *sniffles* It was an awesome gif too.

@filewriterbase13x HA, I was hoping you’d get that.

@Daeus my luck says this gif won’t work, but here you go anyway.

Awesome stuff. You should, like… I don’t know, do a course on it or something. XD

Oh! Well, if you want, you can take it here: 16personalities.com (I think that’s the right one…)

*blinks* Wow, five WIPs? That’s nuts. You’re insane, dear…which is a good thing if you’re gonna survive ’round here. 😉

…I didn’t mean for that to rhyme, it just did.

Anyway, my name’s Elizabeth! I’ve been on the forum for a year now! I’m an INFP/INTP mix, do you know your MBTI type? Happy to meet ya!

I volunteer as tribute.

er…I’m sort of obsessed with MBTI types, and am proud of the fact that I’m a hybrid type (INFP/INTP) and I’m also a superhero. I can fly. So…yeah.

…wow.

There’s a lot here, so I’ll analyze it a bit later (when I have time), but thank you so much for this, Daeus! I’ll get back to you soon, and once I plan out the story (and where exactly the gospel elements fall in it) a bit more, I’d love to get your take on different parts and pieces of it, if that’s okay?

Thanks again. @daeus

@Celticcailin heyy so yes I do songwriting and composition and play half a dozen musical instruments and study musical theory. If you want me to check out lyrics and/or melody or whatever, feel free to add me to the email. 😉 I’d have to look over the song before I could give you much useful feedback though.…[Read more]

Hey there! I’m a little late to the party…sorry about that!

I’ll be everyone has already asked you the cool questions, too…ugh.

Well, here’s one–d’you play any instruments?

hey there! Glad you could join us.

Most people ’round here think of nice, book related questions to ask, but here’s a few generic ones…

Favorite color?

Left-handed or right-handed?

Do you play an instrument?

Welcome to KP!

Here’s my character:

Lillian

Red, slightly wavy hair

16 years old

Blue eyes

5’4

She’s from the 1860s, so she wears a Victorian-style dress

@Dekreel woohooo I love it! *tosses confetti* xP

@SeekJustice @Sam-kowal I’ve actually already got a cabin (plus several other offers, haha) so I’m all good, thanks though! Have fun with the Kapeefer cabin!

It is, definitely. You’ll get it right, though, I know it. 😉

*sighs*

I hate to say it, but I think your friend was right.

It’s not a bad thing, necessarily. The chapter introduced the family dynamic, and introduces a few things that will (obviously) come into play later in the story, but it doesn’t have a whole lot of oomph–by which I mean, something that draws the reader into the story. There’s…[Read more]

Hi! I popped in and read this too, just ’cause I was curious. Hope that’s okay.

Overall, it’s really good so far! I’m just a bit confused as to whose POV you’re using to tell the story? At times, it seems as if it’s being narrated by someone altogether different from the characters in the scene, which is kind of disorienting.

Other than that,…[Read more]

Hey @valtmy, I’d also like to point out that google docs does have a feature you can set the doc to that allows you to pick and choose who has access to your doc based on their email, so if you wanted to do it that way, you could.