@catwing
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Alia replied to the topic Christmas Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
Hold their hand and say ‘You aren’t alone’?
@seekjustice this is really good, from my opinion at least. One thing I would change though is in the above line. instead of saying “and say” I would take out the and so it would look like this: Hold their hand, say ‘You aren’t alone’?
I’ve only written a few poems, so my advice might not be the best t…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@dekreel, why don’t I like Ten? @charisetter, you might want to come save her from the onslaught…
1. He isn’t careful 2. he is the doctor who forgot the war, thus acting like actions don’t have consequences 3. he cares more about impressing his companions than actually getting things done 4. he’s too silly, doesn’t take anything serious 5.he…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@introvert_girl, welcome! By the way, your story sounds FANTASTIC!
@kate-flournoy, you’re over there cheering another INFP in this INFP infested site…so, think you could find another INTP for me?
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Alia replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy, I’ll get started on it tomorrow. today is hectic in my household…
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Alia replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
1. Arlia
2. Centaur
3. was raised in a herd in captivity until she and her brother escaped and became bandits.
4. Black hair and tail, green and blue eyes, horse part of the body is arabian and grey.
5. quick to pick a fight, loyal, distrustful, musical
6. she can talk to you inside your head, Galadriel style.
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Alia replied to the topic Names…again…I think I have a problem in the forum Characters 8 years, 11 months ago
@inkling-for-christ, thanks for the links, I gone to the fantasy one, but not the other one.
@princessfoo, flower names, yes. I’ll have to look into that.
@emily-d, ooh, cultures, I like that idea.
@seekjustice, I really like those.
@ingridrd, the idea of them starting with the same letter is honestly amazing because the names could have…[Read more]
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EpicAddie2 replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@princessfoo Yep!
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NC Stokes replied to the topic The Great Battle of NaNoWriMo 2017 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy Oh, Vytanni Throttlenight is one of our friends on Aetherlight. She has a nasty habit of fainting whenever she sees something epic. It’s kind of turned into a thing, and has been termed “pulling a Vytanni”.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@introvert_girl HIIIIIIIII!!! *overenthusiasm* You already know your MBTI type; you’re gonna fit right in. 😉 Crafty things?! How cool! What sort? Do you like to draw?
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Hiya Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@waterlily YES. I looooove those books. Who’s your favorite character??
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy STEEEEEEAMPUUUUUUNK!!!!! *shatters all windows with screech* *ahem* *begins sweeping up glass* I really, really want to read it. But… life. 🙁
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Jewelry Business Name in the forum Art 8 years, 11 months ago
@Shannon That one has a nice ring to it. I like it! 🙂 Good luck!
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 11 months ago
@ingridrd @jessi-rae Thank’ee!
@catwing BELIEVE IN PORRIGE. That’s a great collage! Even cooler that you took the pictures yourself. They look professional.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@alia Yessss. XD Writers are an odd lot, aren’t we?
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Hannah replied to the topic Jewelry Business Name in the forum Art 8 years, 11 months ago
@shannon well if you ever get back on etsy lemme know! I’d link you on my blog. I don’t have much trafic there but it might help.
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Ingrid replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Guys, I just gotta say that this is going to be totally awesome once @dekreel writes this story!!! *claps hands* *jumps up and down in excitement*
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Ingrid replied to the topic I need a little bit of critique help! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@shannon Just wanted to let you know that I read and critiqued your story this morning. Hopefully I wasn’t too harsh… 🙂
You did a fantastic job! Let me know if you have any questions about my critiques. 😉
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