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@shannon I actually have a character named Hazel 🙂
INFJ ~ 4w5
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@epicaddie2 That’s cool! *sighs* I love that name, especially when it’s associated with green eyes for some reason.
@shannon I think my Hazel has brown eyes… *shrugs* I should probably know this.
INFJ ~ 4w5
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@epicaddie XD Glad you at least remember her name ; )
@shannon 😉
INFJ ~ 4w5
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@shannon Hmmm…for some reason the link isn’t working for me. Could you try posting it again?
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
Sure, here it is https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vTdt5s2PG2F-PmcisOdHk19OxfFQ9TMa8PwY4VOvIpA/edit?usp=sharing
@shannon Just wanted to let you know that I read and critiqued your story this morning. Hopefully I wasn’t too harsh… 🙂
You did a fantastic job! Let me know if you have any questions about my critiques. 😉
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@ingridrd Awesome!
I got an email about your comments. Thank you so much for doing this for me! I read over them in the email, and (although I haven’t looked at them in context) I can already tell that you definitely weren’t to harsh. Trust me, not much bothers me. Thanks again!!! I’ll let you know if I have any questions ?
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