Catwing

@seekjustice Yup, it’s basically just a comical word. 🙂  Oh yeah, Newsies is American.  Okay. 😛

Great!

Yes!  It’s an amazing musical, made in 1976, so it’s old enough for me, but the style is modern enough that I think you’d like it.  The twist on the Cinderella story in this one is that after the prince tries on the slipper and finds the girl…[Read more]

@rochellaine Nope. the only time I’ve heard that word is in Newsies, but it is a fun word. Though I think it’s slightly too comical for the situation 😀

Actually, I like the term “swells”, it is a bit old-fashioned, but I think it works with the more slang way of speaking the lower class would have. It’s also the term Enjolras uses to describe…[Read more]

@seekjustice Do you use the phrase “highfalutin” in Australia? 😛  Just wondering.  That probably wouldn’t work in the scenario you describe.

In America the upperclass are called “the One Percenters” but…that’s kind of a political thing, and actually the One Percent are usually the more conservative capitalists, so they’re really not the “bad g…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Cool, okay. 😀

Well, point one, I’m trying to think of a term I could use instead of the word “Aristocrat”, something which conveys a similar meaning, and that the revolutionaries could use contemptuously.

Secondly, could I ask you some questions about my novel?

@seekjustice Okay, I’m up for a little bit longer.  (My mom asked us to go to sleep a little earlier tonight since we’ve got a lot of stuff to do tomorrow.)  I’m not usually here on Sundays even just for discussions, but I’ve got something I need to do on the computer anyway, so might as well, right? 😀  So, here I am…

What do you want to discuss? 😉

Hey, anyone around. I’m writing ;D @jess-penrose @jane-maree @anyone

@rochellaine I know it’s Sunday for you, but maybe you’re around for discussions?

@the-real-kapeefer So, I am wondering who is older, you or Josiah?

And have no fear, @aratrea , we are all much more devoted to you.  There is no chance of him ever taking over the Kingdom! *laughs at Daniels useless attempt*

BTW, how can you call yourself a real kapeefer?  I have been on the forum only a month and I have many times over the a…[Read more]

@sam-kowal @rochellaine Thank you very much for your advice!  I agree, and will do so.

@alia 😀 Thanks!

leaving, might be back

@filewriterbase13x, THIS IS FANTASTIC!

if you have space to add me you can, if not thats fine

@ariel-ashira, @ingridrd, @rochellaine, @seekjustice, @sam-kowel, @anyone-else

I’m here for a bit

@ariel-ashira, nice signature

@jenwriter17, what type of help do you need? is it with finding the melody? getting the lyrics to flow? just getting lyrics in general? or something else?

@jenwriter17 Go for it!  Can you let us know what you come up with? 🙂  I like the lady in the videos.  She seems sweet, and her voice is beautiful.

I am not much of a songwriter.  I mean, I have written a few good songs with good tunes, but I don’t play any instruments or anything.  My songs and tunes just come to me, like writing does.

@filewriterbase13x Your stories are so fantastic!!!  This is great!  The way B-bot talks makes him sound both cute and wise. 🙂  But I have to ask…what is a B-bot?  Is it something you made up?

*patiently waits turn to be in story*

@filewriterbase13x  *appears from realm of the hiatus*

HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!

*disappears again*

Agh! I mean @skredder.

Oops, @catwing and @skreeder

A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds

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The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)

Part Four: The Losing of Minds

“How? How could I have lost it? It must have been during or after the storm. The storm. Why did I remember that but not who my neighbors were?

I was walking through a forest that I didn’t remember the name of,…[Read more]