CanadaLily

@linus-smallprint

Oooh that’s a good idea!!

And I like your ideas too…I feel like that would be really cool if we did something like that

Now that I’m going back to the beginning…

This is really hard XD

because I know you’re trying to go for the “chaos” vibes of a big family as they get ready for church and the party. You set up Hallie, Easton, and the parents pretty well, especially for the fast-paced scene, but the other siblings kind of disappear throughout the book.

Maybe…[Read more]

@esther-c

To be honest, I’m not really sure.

I might have to reread it a little more and let you know XD

@esther-c

I would just like to see it set up a little more at the very beginning chapters.

I know you’re going for chaos on the Sunday morning before church, but like I mentioned before, since Easton and Hallie’s family is a big one, I think you need to focus more on their family and the dynamics. I’d love to see Hallie’s closeness with her mom…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! you’re the best and I always love exchanging ideas with you <3

I LOVE LITTLE HALLIE

@esther-c

yeah, Cars and Phones BROKE ME

Last week my mom was at Mayo Clinic in Rochester doing more cancer treatments, which was hard since it wasn’t planned. I guess even if it was, it would be hard since she was gone for over a week and me and my siblings and my dad were all missing her a lot and attempting to keep our house from going out of…[Read more]

actually I don’t have your email…for some reason I thought I did XD

Kathleen was the one who helped me publish my short story on the website…so that’s the only reason I have it

i can email it to you if you want!

Oh my goodness I have Kathleen’s email too!

@whalekeeper

I’d say contact Josiah first. Or you could contact them both at the same time….

Girl you just unlocked a new fear that KP will one day become outdated and stop working *cries* and I’m so scared that we’ll all lose contact…that would be so saddd

I agree, something needs to be done…

OMC GUYS GUYS GUYSSSSS
I FOUND A SONG FOR EASTON

It’s “Cars and Phones” by David Dunn

It almost made me cry but it’s perfect for himmmm

@esther-c

All I can say is…

THAT WAS SO GOOD

I actually love your book so much I think I’ve said this before but it’s actually my comfort book…I got so excited when I saw you posted MORE!

After discovering that dragons aren’t as immortal as they seem, a corrupt monarchy attempts to take over the world–however, the children they kidnapped turn against them and keep interfering with their devious plans. 

This is for a new novel I’m brainstorming.

OMC I LOVE EVERYONE’s

A group of traumatized teens fight to stop a group of pathological liars from taking over the world, while fighting the intrusive thoughts to become pathological liars themselves.

@esther-c

Okay that makes sense…I’ll keep reading and waiting for more and I’ll let you know if I come up with anything else!

@jonas

I have a bunch of trips that I’ll be gone for, but you can start without me!!! I’m just not sure how available I’ll be until my schedule frees up in July. And I’m sure I can pop on every now and then in between being gone lol

@hybridlore

<3

I don’t go to camp until this afternoon so I’m really excited and nervous!!!!!!

@esther-c

Aw girl you’re the best <3

@whalekeeper

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

Oh girl I’m so sorry *hugs* I don’t know exactly what you’re going through but I do know that  cancer is horrible and sucks to deal with…if YOU need to talk to someone who (to some degree at least) un…[Read more]