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@thearcaneaxiom

Another way could be that his father has forced him into dangerous challenges with the intent of quickening his sons maturity, skill, and growth. It would work, but would cause his son to despise him, and perhaps see his father as the ultimate challenge that needs to be overcome or something like that.

That would actually make a…[Read more]

@smiley

Yeah! Oh, come to think of it, I am a lot like Zoe and Olivia as well.

I remember Tony and Brianna (I love the name Brianna)! I miss them, and the Mulligans (especially Lisa and Nick).

What happens to Kelly? I miss her!

@jonas

Well, I haven’t totally developed his character yet, but I know that he gets a lot of his confidence from relying on himself and that he can basically do anything he wants in Erstonia, so he’s kind of entitled. To be honest, I’m not sure what would really scare him, except the Pythonos. He’s not scared of them at the moment, but he will…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yeah, I get that people can’t do the show anymore so they stop doing the character, but I agree that they should bring back characters. I wonder what Jared would be like as an adult? I know they had one episode where he was on a phone call during Candid Conversations, but he should be in an actual main part.

Ooh, what about Rodney,…[Read more]

@smiley @sarafini @trailblazer

I’m not sure if this is an RP or not…but if it is….I want to be Jules or Valerie. Unless one of you guys has any ideas for new characters I can RP. I know we all hate Valerie (well, hate’s a little extreme, but you know what I mean), so I want her to be a sympathetic villain arc, lol. I can show why she does…[Read more]

@trailblazer

One of my favorites:

“I’m not a singer. I’m a child of God who happens to sing.” I actually found this one on a KP article, and I replaced the sing with write! So it goes, “I’m not a writer. I’m a child of God who happens to write”.

Also, the one in my signature.

“Every page has a flaw only the author sees.”

@trailblazer

*me casually butting into the conversation*

Hiiii!

Lucy’s a good one! I’m kind of a goody-two-shoes as well (I still don’t get why people say that’s a bad thing, haha!)

But I would probably be Aubrey Shepherd. She easily caves in to peer pressure (for me its not as extreme as her, its just it’s easy for me to gossip and act…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

I have fixed the “connecting” issues on Reedsy, just not on KP.

I’m deleting the chapter where Sef and Lilitu are in the woods. Or at least for now, lol. I’m filling in the gaps a lot right now and fixing some stuff up.

@aranel

Yay, we have another Sara(h)!

But you spell your name wrong, lol. The correct way to spell it is actually Sara. haha!

(If you couldn’t tell, I am joking. Obviously, there’s no right or wrong way to spell it. I probably just ruined my own joke, but I can’t risk offending people on KP. I want to be friends with everyone, lol)

I’m going…[Read more]

@grcr

Yeah….

I’m glad I changed it.

@spinner4him

Here’s the link to my WIP.

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ

If you have any critiques, please reply to this thread and tag me! Thanks for being interested in this! 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Do you think I’ve fixed most of the problems we’ve discussed? Anything I need to work on in the “new” chapters?

@acancello @mineralizedwritings  @grcr @esther-c @trailblazer

Okay guys, so since Hugo and Ottoline are kind of a thing, I realized that they have a pretty big age gap. Hugo’s 16, and Ottoline’s only 13! I’m not a fan of age gaps like this during teen romance, so I’m moving Ottoline’s age up to 14/15 so it’s not as weird.

Ottoline

“Well, I…[Read more]

@spinner4him

Okay! Great! I’ll tag you in the thread.

@acancello

HE KISSED HER!!! OH MY GOSH!!!!!! 😍 😂 🤣

THAT IS SOOOOO SWEET!!!!!

@rae

Yes, he’s in a ball whenever he joins. When he joins, the ball will have already begun, so he’ll probably have to get changed and get a mask from the basement (unless he always wears a suit and tie, flats and a mask on regular occasions)

@trailblazer

That’s funny! haha

@grcr

Okay!

@grcr

I’m pretty sure that the house only said that they had to participate in the party itself (I just looked back and read it), not that everybody had to dance. So this might work.

Everybody has to wear a mask and dress up, I’m assuming.

Except now we have to decide which boys are going to sit in the corner and which ones are going to dance.

@thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin

Here’s where my problem lies: I need to show small details (a well outside the city, the slums, different districts, etc.) but drawing each individual building and block and street is IMPOSSIBLE since it’s a huge city! So what do you guys think I should do?

Should I omit these details altogether or is there a way…[Read more]