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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 2 weeks ago
I have a few thoughts.
“Sabina,” called Turin. “Come down, we have to go.”
Sabina deliberately turned away.
“Sabina come,” commanded Turin, firmly.
She did not move.
Turin’s eyes narrowed. “Why you little–– Sabina! You get down here right this instant! Get down or I’ll––”
This scene felt a little off. He went from being minorly annoyed to th…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 2 weeks ago
I wouldn’t have minded….. except I have a thing for young guys having facial hair. They can’t really do it well, and I don’t like it. At all.
Oh. Then you better not come to my highschool or the schools in my area..there’s like 15 year olds with beards and moustaches and sideburns. #scarred-for-life
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint
YUCK!!! You sir, do not pay attention to descriptions!!!! A full beard! UGH! No! He’s nineteen or twenty!
Ummm …I seriously thought that he’d have a beard and be in his twenties/thirties!
And I thought Aaron was even older!
I mean, I still consider late twenties/early thirties to be a young man…so you m…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 months, 2 weeks ago
Sabina has brown hair, her brother has black. She is only 16 at this point.
WHAT?!?!
I thought she had dark hair, eyes, and tan skin! And I thought she was at LEAST 22!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months, 2 weeks ago
I love Just Be Held!!!!!! ahhh sooooo good!!
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months, 2 weeks ago
OH MY GOODNESS NEVER WALK ALONE IS PEFECT FOR SABINA!!!!!!!!!!
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months, 2 weeks ago
ohhhh okay!!!
NF songs are PERFECT for the vibe oh my GOODNESS I’m obsessed!
Okay great! (I’d suggest looking at the YouTube ones, they’re shorter, and I posted all the names. The Spotify one is just a huge compilation of both of them and it will take FOREVER to listen to them all! but if you want to go ahead!)
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months, 2 weeks ago
You looked up every single one?!?! That’s like 3 hours of songs!!!!
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah!!! I love that! Have you heard mine yet? The YouTube version I just posted is wayyy less chaotic XD XD
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months, 2 weeks ago
h ttps://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLfEHhSvhvMAkrHwvcxVlcEHfvGn4DoO5N
here’s chapter by chapter!
Prologue: Believer
Chapter 1: Lie to Me
Chapter 2: Fall on Me
Chapter 3: Rescue
Chapter 4: I’ll Be There
Chapter 5: Crazy Beautiful You
Chapter 6: Intro III
Chapter 7: HAPPY
Chapter 8: isn’t it harmless?
Chapter 9: Hate Myself
Chapter…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months, 2 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months, 2 weeks ago
I love the vibe of your playlist! I love On Our Way!
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @anyone-else-that-doesn’t-have-spotify
h ttps://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-songs-playlists/page/19/#post-183596A
A song that describes my MC (Lilitu): Miracle Child by Brandon Lake
A song that describes other MC (Sef): Broken is Beautiful by The Young Escape
A song for the villain (Kaden and S…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months, 2 weeks ago
You know…I’m going to make a version of my spotify playlist on youtube so any of you guys can hear it! Give me a sec…
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 5 months, 2 weeks ago
I only see 5 public playlists. I’m listening to yours now!!!!!!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 2 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 2 weeks ago
You’re good, all good!! Hey, I feel annoying too so you’re not alone 😂 So many teens feel bad about communicating their feelings and they shouldn’t have to feel bad. They’re still kids, we’re still kids.
Exactly!!! I’ve learned a lot in the past few months…it’s really important to give yourself grace and if you’re awkward and get r…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 5 months, 2 weeks ago
My bad for rambling, I’m nerdy about this stuff 😂
YES YES YES
plotting is so hard for those exact reasons! I get sooo overwhelmed and just..give up lolI’ll try that it sounds fun!!!!!!!!!
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 months, 2 weeks ago
My thoughts are at your service 🥰😅 And you don’t overwhelm me! Only certain kinds of people/moods overwhelm me.
Okay good! I’m always paranoid that I annoy people or overwhelm people…that’s another thing I have to work through! My goodness I feel so broken 🤣🤣
You don’t have to give up. I do want to point out though… whether or not y…
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