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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
one thing I’ll suggest, is that I feel like you don’t really introduce the family to us in the first few chapters. At first I wasn’t even sure if Blake was their sibling or not XDXD
They do have a HUGE family, so setting a solid foundation and making all the siblings and the parents unique and established in our minds would be a big thing you…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Sorry it took me so long to get to this!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted an update 2 weeks, 3 days ago
https://editor.reedsy.com/s/p8SdhuQ
@keilah-h @whalekeeper @esther-c @grcr @theducktator @theshadow @anyone-else
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
No you weren’t in this RP, but I thought you might want to know the whole story behind Wyoh lolll
Because I think we all forgot it, and we were the ones who came up with it lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Did you hear that one of my characters actually did kill someone in the School RP?
WHATTTT
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I think that Character Party was ONE OF A KIND
And that’s why we can’t ever replicate it
Sadly
But like I think I’m gonna remember it for the rest of my life…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
I knowwww
I remember when Fire Face burned down the castle and just added so much more chaos hahaha
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
I KNOW 😭😭😂
Jonas always had the best comebacks to EVERYTHING hahaha
and him and his sister always made the BEST memes
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@highscribeofaetherium @jonas and @rae
you two…your characters somehow ALWAYS hated each other and wanted to kill each other…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @rae @beth-torres @trailblazer
GUYS DO YOU REMEMBER THIS *cries*
h ttps://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/character-party/page/201/
I was laughing so harddd
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
I really enjoy reminiscing about the Character Party RP, even though Ottoline (and my writing in general) is SO CLICHE and CRINGE…it’s still so funny hahaha
I think my favorite line is when Nahim wouldn’t take a break and then Ellis was like “SOMEONE GET A ROPE!” and it was so funny
And then we all made #makeNahimtakeabreak hashtags lolll
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
Um, YES he was hilarious.
It’s crazy because I forgot he existed and I WROTE HIM.
I’d almost forgotten about Wyoh’s origins, that was kinda weird 😂
I KNOW!!! Like I totally forgot about that random person that just hopped on lolll and then I was like WHATTT
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Potato news 64 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 1 day ago
@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
do you guys remember this RP *cries*
I read through a good chunk of it and I was laughing so hard!!!
Our RP’s always ended in utter chaos lolllDoes anyone remember Compound Fracture 🤣😂😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Also go to this page
@esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Esther, I also think it’s so cool how you write about small everyday struggles. It’s hard to find beauty in the mundane, when it seems the same day after day.
But in your writing, you can make even the everyday struggles, the repeating tasks beautiful, and everything you write has a message, and I think it’s so cool!!!! And I know God will use you <33
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oh wow!
so in order to exert his power he needs to steal from her. Interesting.
yeah, he gets power off of the lies she believes. but she doesn’t know that yet.
ohhhh! ok that makes sense.
I feel terrible for her. That life seems excruciating.
yeah…it is *cries*
Wait whattt
Iverrrr 🧐
PLOT TWIST BWAHAHAA
What’s the twist? I didn’t see a twist, but that might’ve just been me.
Because TIGIN showed up…the same Pythonos that tried to kill Liv in the desert, and the same Pythonos that held Ottoline captive…he survived the tidal wave and he knows Iver!
Oh I’d forgotten his name.
ohhhh okay! so it’s all coming together.
YESSSSS
bwahahahahha
Oh my goodness, poor Sef. *is slightly traumatized* Lilitu, save her!
I KNOWWWWW
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