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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
OMC
I’m so sorry!
I don’t think this popped up in my email so I never saw it *cries*
How am I just now seeing this?!
Anyways, that makes a lot of sense!
I will think about that XDXD
And don’t worry about the length, I enjoyed reading your thoughts!!!!
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RAE replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 1 month ago
Sorry, I don’t read Middle-grade fiction, so I won’t be much help
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Chase
Chase hesitated. “I-I…” he fell silent, shaking his head. “N-no i-dea. W-who’s Lo-Lo-is?”
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whaley replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 1 month ago
– What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?
Mm, probably the general sense of wholesomeness. The stories weren’t deep by YA standards, as YA tends to be emotional and brooding. But the MG novels I enjoyed had, rather, a sense of appreciation for the good things in a kid’s life. And even if bad things were happening to the p…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I don’t know. XD Maybe because I’m KP’s friendly neighborhood psychic.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
No other metroidvania will be able to compete except the og Hollow Knight
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
SILKSONG!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤡💀✨❤️
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
but gave up before finishing
#relatable
The body language and expressions in the 1st and 4th panels especially are amazing XD
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
Cute wrinkly noses. 🙃
I think Ellie is the right kind of person to have around when I’m cooking, loll. I make great food, but always leave the stove on.
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whaley replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Children (under 10 maybe?) usually know that death exists, but aren’t very afraid of it because they don’t understand.
I’d move that down to 7 or 8 – when it comes to not understanding death at all.
My 9-year-old sister has responded to death with some solid understanding of its impact. Last Sunday, she was being difficult about som…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Chase
Chase got up, leaving his soda can beside where he was sitting. He retrieved Felicity’s can, planning to throw it away in the proper place later. He sat back down again.
“L-like s-sun…sat?” Chase was quiet and still for a moment, before turning to look at Felicity. He had formed his eyes into a reflection of a bright sunset.…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
First off, funny forum signature.
Second, what are the ages of your characters? because in my experience, different ages respond differently to death. Children (under 10 maybe?) usually know that death exists, but aren’t very afraid of it because they don’t understand. Adults, especially people in their 20s, and 40s, for whatever…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
Yes, much better. My stomach ache went away in the night, and hasn’t come back yet. Still aren’t sure what exactly was going on.
Thank you to everyone who prayed for me!
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 1 month ago
Prayers that my family doesn’t move again. My parents want to get my siblings into a private school, but only two schools are considering us, and one of them is too far away for the drive. We would still be in the same area, still going to the same church and all, but I do not want to pack up and get house shocked for the millionth time. E…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Darn it, I lost The Game again
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
It makes my think of Indian Henna art.
Ah yes. XD
@rae He’s a very artistic friend, what can I say? XD He also draws and brings his electric guitar everywhere. (My class is an interesting collection of humans.)
@loopylin Yep!
@keilah-h I got ‘em by making ‘em. Monday class is very long, and doodling on my hand sometimes keeps…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
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RAE replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@liberty @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
You write animal stories, right? (If I tagged the wrong people by accident, sorry)
This seems like your forte.
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RAE replied to the topic Group Art Challenges! in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
Totally okay!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Group Art Challenges! in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
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