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@raxforge

Check this out.

@whalekeeper

Aw, Barnes is trying to be the comforting grandmother to everyone!

@theshadow @whaley

Tenz&Reid

Tenz peeked out from where he hid his face, studying the pictures. Slowly, he unfolded himself, tenderly reaching out to grasp the packet. He studied the pictures much longer this time, looking up every once in a while with his blue…[Read more]

@raxforge

I am the asker, lol. I’m just gauging interest in using a screenwriting format. 😛

Has anyone tried writing a screenplay? Or wants to?

Sometimes I can give a kid an ‘adult’ responsibility and they snap out of crying. I don’t know if that would work here, Rae, but she’s trying. XD

@rae @theshadow

Barnes

“I was thinking we start down this corridor along the edge of the castle, and scour the place for clues and people,” Barnes told Percival.

The group waited a few minutes for Reid to calm his brother, who remained stubbornly curled up. He was still agitated.

Barnes was used to people who looked much younger than their…[Read more]

Of course you can do whatever you want, I’m playing the other side’s advocate so you have balanced reasons for whatever you do.

@linus-smallprint

(also, anyone else who is reading this, what do you think?)

You have a very sensible writer voice, with hints of humor and warmth. I think because of your semi-calm tone, you don’t seem like the kind of person who would write a super intense POV scene of shame for Eric, at least not until the arc’s climax.

And from what I can…[Read more]

@keilah-h

’d start questioning my existence though. Like, monsters made out of bread?? What universe is this?

A really weird one. That’s the point in a realistic dream that you know it’s a dream, and not real life XD

After Andrew read your reply, he texted me asking about mutant bread lol.

@theshadow @thewhalekeeper

Reid

“Is that why he acts like a child?” Rowen asked.

Reid nodded, “Sometimes I have a hard time remembering that he is the older, or that he even is a teen!”

@keilah-h @raxforge

good, you can handle our craziness.

Well…he deals with me, somehow

just hope you two didn’t have to fight mutant bread with your friends afterward….lol

LOL! That would be something!

@keilah-h @raxforge

October 10th was the day Andrew admitted he had a crush on me, and the day I finally stopped being in denial and wrote in my journal that I loved him too.

And…I spelled your name wrong. Sorry

@keilah-h ^^^

@kielah-h

The utter absurdity of this phrase though.

Lol

My Aussie may actually see this…

He’ll find it amusing though

That makes sense! Cool! Though if Soldier represents Americans…actually, the writers may have had a point…

Oh and the honey thing? Ornithiforms LOVE honey. He has this habit of getting it all over himself on…

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@esther-c @highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, I’ve noticed things are slowing down. 😔 The best way I can think of picking things up again would be to update the articles, add new material.

Does anyone remember the time they added a page for a new rank of KP writers? Anyone who wrote three of either articles, short stories, or poems? It was there one…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I just decided to read that chapter completely out of order. I’ve only read up to chapter 5 besides this, I think, and that was a while ago. XD I can give some feedback about this chapter, as someone who read it without any context whatsoever.

I liked the sense of friendship I got from all the good guys, even if they couldn’t…[Read more]

@esther-c

😨

Yeah… the forum is basically all that’s left of KP 😟 I get kind of sad when I think about it.

@keilah-h

plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.

I’m planning to use creative liberties because of this, lol. After all, if some of these people turn violent in the game, that’s not accurate to their canon internal values. This is alternate noncanon; the most moral, innocent character might defenestrate their…[Read more]

@esther-c

Awesommme, I’m glad that worked. For me, I want to add description in longer paragraphs because they have a softer sense of time, and you can afford to give the information in a solid chunk. And then like you said, actions and dialogue are shorter.

Not that I always follow my own thoughts! Buuut verbalizing this might help me stay consistent.

@loopylin

Yaayyy the Loops likey

Now I’m really curious what all the characters want their wishes to be. I think I know Dante’s maybe.

So, as it happens, I am curious too. XD I have some idea of how each character would act in a survival scenario, and everyone wants to survive, buuuuuut I don’t know what each character would wish for. I have gue…[Read more]