calidris

Mirabelle hid her mouth behind her hand, giggling as I seethed.
I clenched my hands to my sides, gritting my teeth. This was, after all the third time today she’d got me with that one.

@kathleenramm

What I mean by poorly designed politics, is that even though its a modern system, they disregarded world leaders. Like the president of U.S.A was irrelevant in all of this. I think the author was just tryna dodge work in figuring out how to add all the politics but still make it convincing.

@elfwing

I totally agree. This is part…[Read more]

@anatra23 hahaha sounds like someone got inspiration from Reign if Fire but didnt know how to play it out. In this movie the dragons also start attacking 2010, but most of the film supposedly takes place 2020 lol I joke with my friends that they predicted catastrophe but they predicted wrong; its covid instead of dragons. Idk which is worse XD

@kathleenramm whoops lol I forgot I only answered in my head not on here xD

I guess that is important to me, yes, as someone who has met people misguided by ‘christian’ books, fantasy or not and them thinking somehow that counts as the bible it does bother me, a lot.

If someone doesn’t know the Truth of the bible first, that could lead them…[Read more]

“What is that?!” Mirabelle squeaked. “It’s so ugly!“

True

@devastate-lasting each to their own 🙂 i mean, i didn’t agree with the theology part if it but other than that I liked it

@kathleenramm

While I’ve been exploring books, I haven’t found too many that would fall under a C tier for me. But, A year or two ago my sis and I challenged each other to go to the library and pull out a book that sounded good, then exchange books. I found for her one that really sounded great on the shelf, then I gave it to her, she read it and…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 thank you! 😁

@keilah-h cool cool! You’re pretty creative, I love it!

@sparrowhawke cool cool! I’m gonna post my first history post this week, actually.

Ah! Thanks! Good point, I am not so good with such things, so thank you for pointing it out. I’ll remember that.

@sparrowhawke yeah its a gem! youre welcome

yeah i think that is a common thing though. XD i get that haha it took me months to finally think of a title for one of my poems lol

@joy-caroline wow! Thanks!

@sparrowhawke (tagging people as I think of them) I saw you like ancient history, and base your cultures off them, that makes two of us!!!

http://www.elfwingsadventure.com/introduction

@sparrowhawke hello, I know I’m late, but may I say good job and that is incredible expression of a pain that is familiar to me.

the first title ideas that come to mind is “To say what I think” “How to say…” “Maybe I’ll say” maybe those are terrible but i wanted to put them there 🙂

@writerlexi1216 @power @lydia-s

@maryg3 thanks!!!

@keilah-h yeah, I really like the dragon people part of it, that didn’t bother me; dragons who were turned into humans and could only marry a normal human, and if they did, their children would be half dragon, that was a cool idea. but the Biblical stuff was so suffocatingly present in everything I couldn’t just pick my way through it, like after…[Read more]

@keilah-h cool!! Good job, i like the backstory!

great drawing, he definitely looks villainy and the story ending… may be my personal favorite lol