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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
I like this a lot!! This section is good. I was trying to remember what happened beforehand. So far the stories have flowed, even though they are individual stories. This one seems a little out of place regarding the last one.
otherwise, i like this!!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @hybridlore @whalekeeper @keilah-h
Sorry for not posting in eight days. I hit Writer’s Block while trying to edit the next story to go on here and writing the next one 🙁
I’m not sure how long until I can post the full thing, but until then, I’m gonna post a snippet of the next…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
awesome! Glad I could be of help.
I think we’re all a little defensive of our stuff. 😂
I remember when you kept criticizing Aaron I was crushed because he’s a lot like me and I felt like you were criticizing me and saying I was a cardboard cutout. It took a few weeks for me to separate myself from him and see your cri…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago

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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
I have succumbed. It took me long enough to find them, but it is done.
I had too much fun with this. XD

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Elishavet Elroi posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
I think she was lost in her mind more often than anyone suspected. She had a peculiar habit of laughing when there was nothing to laugh about, and all too often she would smile off into empty space as if seeing a friendly face there.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I really like this chapter! Everything critical I was going to say @hybridlore already covered.
I really enjoy these characters. I like how Jack sticks up for his sister, and I’m eager to find out what happens and where Elina got her scar!
make sure to keep tagging me because I’m really enjoying this.
and those girls giving her a h…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
i really love the direction.
character development seems good and solid. But it’s hard to know that from just reading an outline.
again, it all depends on how you play it, but I was feeling Eustace and dragon change more than Kalmar and wolf. (Even though it is a wolf) I think you’re fine and should go for it. I can let you…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I like this much better. I feel more comfortable, but it also plays into the allegory style better. (At least in my opinion)
my only suggestion (besides fine combing because there were a few typos) is old be this paragraph.
I do not know what Alan thought as he used the spell, so instead of telling you that, let’s say he in…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
thank you both for the sympathy and prayers!!
Great timing!
thank you!! I was proud of that one. 😂
oh dear! I hope you end up liking Roland then. 😅
I promise it was completely coincidental.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
I have a lot more experience making art than selling it lol… I’ve done fun commissions for free and stuff, but nothing for sale
Well, that’s a little more experience than I have. The most I have done others is cards. XD
You could charge for your stuff though. It’s really good! Your style is so distinctive. I love look…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Thank you for the resources!
I come from a photographer’s family, so we have actually used Adobe PhotoShop for years. Unfortunately, the license went out of date and we got to find out why so many people grump about it. O.O
I’ve heard about ProCreate from a calligraphy site I follow too. I might look into it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Being an illustrator is one of my ambitions as well. I’ve never been commissioned to do anything yet. I did talk to one publishing company… but my art style did not fit the needs of the author they have…. (Once I have a few interior illustrations for my book that I am satisfied with, I will send them over to this company a…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh my. Y’all are amazing.
I’m going to work through and comment in a bit.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Thank you!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
K, I don’t have a young Rory face claim, but this is him when he’s older, (about eighteen) it still gives you an idea of how he looks. He’s sixteen right now, 6’2″, but otherwise looks just about like this, though a little younger.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Sure thing!!! That would be so awesome if you did!
do you want a description or I could just post his face-claim right here.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
Okay, little UPDATE y’all.
We had a death in the family. (don’t worry, not someone I even met before. He was on my dad’s side of the family and they’re all messed up.) Anyhow, due to craziness and the fact that my dad is the only sane person on that sid…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
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