BuildsByGideon

@Gracie-j

Thanks! 🙂 I know, he captured my heart .5 seconds after I made him XD Yup, I may try that with the raven! Newton had his raven before Caira had her owl (she used to have an arctic fox), but when I switched it, I realized they both had birds 😀 Oh well.

@ribbonash

Aww, thank you for offering to read it! It’s my first novel (and first chapters) so I still have a long way to go, but I’d love any feedback you have! Here’s my first chapter 🙂 Thank you so much!!

@Gracie-j

THANK YOU, GIRL!! 🙂 And yes, I did plan on having a divider between them to smooth out the transitions (that must’ve slipped my mind). And *sheepish grin* I have a habit of ‘telling-not-showing” so thank you for reminding me! *flees to Google Docs to edit*

Yay!! Girl, that’s AWESOME!! I’m so happy that you’ve fangirled over them :D…[Read more]

@gracie-j

Thank you!! 🙂 Yeah, I’ve already been in love with him for a loooong time XD He still looks slightly younger than how I think of him, but that’s fine. I thought about including his raven, too (I don’t think I’ve mentioned that Newton carries a raven around on his shoulder) but didn’t have the room…

@issawriter7

YAY!!! Thank you, Issa!! Your feedback is SO HELPFUL and SUPER SUPPORTIVE!! 🙂

I’m really glad you like Deek!! *whispers* If I’m being honest, I’m starting to love him more every time I write him! But don’t tell him that, ’cause he’d probably kill me XD

WOOHOO! I’m super happy to hear that the mystery/suspense is good! I tried to…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

I ADORE this chapter soooooo much!!!!! Like WHERE do I even begin????

1. YESS!!!! Your characters are soooooo awesome!!!!! Deek’s probably my fav. Just saying. XD

2. YES!!! I’d HAVE to keep on reading ’cause there’s just soooo many questions and I NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!

3. The pacing is PERFECT!!! I LOOOOVED this second chapter…[Read more]

@nova21

Aww, girl, you’re ABSOLUTELY 100% WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was a pleasure to be able to read that first chapter!!!!! I enjoyed it soooooo much!!!! Oooh, YEA!!! That’d be really cool!!!!!! You’re soooo welcome, Ella!!!!!!!!! <333

So this is one of my first attempts at sketching Newton. It’s about 90% accurate to how he looks in my head, but *shrug* this is just a first try. The poor boy needs a haircut, but he is homeless, so his appearance is a little rough. Tell me what y’all think! 🙂

By the by, if some others wanted to read it, I’d really appreciate the feedback! I may tag a few more people (because every smidget of feedback is helpful for a first-time writer!) 🙂 Obviously you’d have to go back to the first post of my first chapter…

@jenwriter17 @kayleigh-idea @ribbonash @wyn-rose @daisy-torres @mkfairygirl @godlyfantasy12

@devastate-lasting

Thank you so much! 🙂 I may need it… lol

@devastate-lasting

Awww, thank you! 🙂 I appreciate it the feedback (it was super helpful, so thank you!) Pacing is something that can be a little difficult for me, but I’m glad you think it’s good *wipes sweat off forehead* This is my first novel, so I’m really glad for all the feedback 😀

@joy-caroline

Girl, this was INCREDIBLE!!!!!! I LOOOOOVED IT!!!!!!!!! You’re very talented at this!!!!!!! <333

@gracie-j

Well, I know for me, if there’s a lot of characters in a story a cast list really helps me keep track of who is who. Normally, cast lists don’t spoil anything for me ’cause I’m someone who only reads it when a character shows up a second time and I don’t remember who he/she was. So you could put it at the end of your book, and it could…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms Cool!!!! Fanfic is a lot of fun!!!!! I’ve only written two fanfic short stories and they were based on The False Prince by Jennifer A. Nielsen. Maybe I’ll share them here soon. 🙂

@scripter-of-kingdoms

Aw, girl don’t worry about it!!! <333 Take your time 😀 I really appreciate that you’ll read it for me! Your feedback is super helpful 🙂

@nova21 Hey! I just wanted to say that I WILL read this, I’m a bit busy atm XD but I promise I will read this and give you feedback. 😀 Hope you understand!

@writerlexi1216 Hey! Sorry I took a while to respond to this XD. I promise I WILL read this, I’m just a bit busy right now, but wanted to let you know I WILL read it. I am very excited to!!! <33333

@daisy-torres Haha, ikr!!! Its  face is just so weird and creepy…