@bluejay
Active 7 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Ivy Rose replied to the topic Input on my logo please in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus thank you! I do like the font, but the lines are so thin even at this substantially blown up size.
@Bluejay EEEK!!! I didn’t even see the missing E! Thank you!!!! 🙂
@Hope I do really like the fancy Y at the end of Publishing, but I like the sound of Publications better. Maybe he can do a fancy S or something. 🙂
Do you all think the…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Yes @rolena-hatfield and @bluejay! I love those movies, and yes, I have read the Highwayman. Lovely— the rhythm for that one is absolutely… splendiferous.
Ah… to hear Anne reciting The Lady of Shalott… drama. Pure drama.
Willows whiten, aspens quiver,
little breezes dusk and shiver,
thro’ the wave that runs for ever,
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay I’m sorry but I just can’t help but jump in! I love Anne of Green Gables. (though I’ve only seen the first and second film). I just watched the first two films with some friends this past weekend. That scene were she acts out The Lady of Shallot poem is one of my favorites! I grew up watching those two movies and actually didn’t…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@Bluejay— great so far! The only thing I would say is watch out for subject-openers— every sentence in your beginning paragraph starts with the subject, and that can get to sounding a little odd. You might try merging some of those sentences together just to vary the rhythm.
@Daeus… well, that’s not quite exactly what I was saying… you…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
To interpret Kate into modern english, what she said is to envelop yourself in poetry until it takes over your brain and you begin to think poetically. Poetry is really a great foundation for prose. Seriously. Get a book on poetry (The Roar On The Other Side) and some poetry books. Find a corner and read. It will be the most bestistest…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's Block. in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Actually @bluejay, my problem is not being unable to think of story ideas, but just the opposite! I see story ideas everywhere— in faces, in old buildings, in trees, in clouds, in poems, in blobs of paint stuck on a canvas. As @Daeus said, I
let my brain particles loose to search the universe for any possibilities and then have them come back…
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Ivy Rose replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay YES!!! We have snow. A lot of snow. Of course you can visit me…why don’t we just trade places for awhile? You get snow and I get warm weather. Deal? 😉
Hey, I do that to my ‘in’s’ all the time! My fingers can’t keep up with my brain! 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I need help with a line in my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Yes, post it, @bluejay! There’s a for short stories here. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Realistic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus I’m sure we all thank you we don’t live in a black hole. We are very grateful. 😉
@Joy-Schmidt okay… I think I got it. I’ll just ask a few general questions to get you started. First off, is he cautious because he doesn’t have experience? If so, the caution is going to be one of uncertainty and indecisive fear, with lots of nail-biting,…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Realistic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay The Count of Monte Cristo.
… had to say that.
