@beth-torres
Active 12 hours, 12 minutes ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Paper isn’t allowed, but non-gun weapons are.
Well, at my Dad’s work, menthols aren’t allowed places, yet he always has a razor knife in his pocket.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
Alright! XD Thanks, I appreciate it.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I think Gregory would definiately interrogate Junior, since Junior has an unregistered pet and boots already! This could get interesting!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I wish to join this thing as well!!
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Ruth replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
My thoughts are the same as Jonas, but a horse “pen” is correctly called a stall. If the horse is in a field outside, or a fenced in area, it’s called a paddock. If you need horsey terms, just tag me.
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Got it!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, I knew it was pretty obvious. I’m not sure how else to write it (where it’s not obvious) in such a short word count.
So, yeah. As soon as I posted it I was like, oh, I need to add something that talks about how the rules/guards have been changed. Really when I wrote it I was thinking it’d have a few more scenes, but then when I got…[Read more] -
hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
It’s almost 2024 … 😳
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Ugh, I know, that’s the worst. Maybe try Nameberry? I usually go there for names.
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hybridlore started the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @rae @kyronthearcanin @trailblazer @anyone-interested
Hi! I wrote this short story… I think last week, and I would love any critiques or advice you guys have. I’m not really sure if the ending is timed right… but anyway, I’m excited to see what you think! The…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Peter gave a look of confusion which Pietro replied with a narrowing of his eyes. “They’re my chocolates.”
“Pietro.” Hannah gave the “look” that Pietro had known forever. “Let the kid have a chocolate.”
“These are rare Sokoivan chocolates, do you know how hard they are to find?”
“They’re hersheys just written in Sokovian,” Wanda argue…
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
I like it! Blair and Blaine are really similar names, though. That might get confusing, unless it’s intentional?
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Ruth replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Is it more like the word “real”, but with the ‘l’ cut off and “eln” stuck on?
yes, I believe you could say that.
I’m probably always going to read it in my head as “realm” with an n (nothing sounds wrong about that to me) just cause that’s how it looks.
That makes sense. It just sounds wrong to me because my most successful way of m…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic An aggravation over Stained Glass in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 8 months ago
@koshka This is really beautiful!
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Ruth replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Thank you for your thoughts.
I don’t really understand pronunciations that well, I know how it should sound in English, and I know how it should sound in Realn (for in reality, all the pronunciations are off, since the Realn language often adds sounds to words that are not represented in the word itself.) mainly because of accents and…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @beth-torres
someone else rp, I don’t really have anything. This is our last rp:
Gunslinger
As the bits of bomb inside the bubble broke apart a centimeter a minute, Gunslinger turned around, flipping a switch on his gun and shooting over several heads to blast a hole in the opposite wall.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
I think Sef and Chase are basically done talking (so are Liv and Lukas)…so sure!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Yeah, Rylee loves her dog named Bear, and just animals and general XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago

I’m not that happy with it for a couple reasons, but it captures pieces of Nahim’s heart rather well.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Sounds like a plan!
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