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Ruth replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @smiley @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @whoever
I just typed this out to get the jist of a short story idea. I’d like any thoughts or feedback, whether negative or positive. it’s called One Bullet
One Bullet
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh wow, Chase’s powers are cool :0
Thank you *bows* one of the many things that drove me crazy trying to figure out XD
@loopy
Usually my problems become my charries’ problems, not the other way around lol
Yeah, that happens too. Idk, I cry with Alpha when he looses Emmie, reject Gloria with Glace when he was banished, I’m sho…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
oh, and any injuries sustained in one of his forms, does transfer into his other forms.
He also technically can do magic, but that is even more dangerous and chancey than him shifting.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Actually they are from completely different Galaxies. Shyiads are more universal than Nagas though, since they can shift into almost any organic life form. Chase has ancient shyiad blood, but it is polluted by his manly blood. It is almost a miracle he can shapeshift, that’s how long ago the shyiad blood was introduced into his line. He…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Wow. Chase’s loyalties are really coming out.
Is it normal that as I was writing that rp, that my heartrate literally got faster and i almost felt genuine fear? Is it normal for writer’s in a character cloak to deeply feel the emotions of charries, or is it just me being more insane than usual?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@jonas @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @loopylin
Chase Duke
“It’s so dark,” Sef whispered. Chase drew her protectively against his body.
“It’s okay.” He hoped she couldn’t hear the panicked beat of his heart. He looked up at the sign, ignored the girl coming from nowhere, and spoke in a tone that sounded like a seasoned war veteran warning a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Only advice I have is just brainstorming. If you want it to be really unique, think of a different concept or idea that could maybe be tied into the story, but I don’t think it has to. If the plot and characters are good readers won’t care if the setting isn’t super distinct. Maybe @thearcaneaxiom could help? (Sorry if she already tagged you.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic hi it's meeeeeeee in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
Hi, nice to meet you! I’m Hybridlore or just Hybrid, a homeschooled high school sophomore and YA science fiction writer. I didn’t read all the questions you got, so sorry if you’ve already answered these.
Favorite book?
What’s your WIP about?
What genre do you write and why?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hi, Peoples! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
@thelittlejupiterion
Hi, Miriam! It’s nice to meet you! I’m Hybridlore or Hybrid on here, and I write YA science fiction mostly. I’m a high school sophomore, and I’ve also been homeschooled my whole life! Some things I like are singing, playing my violin, and reading.
What genre do you write and why?
Top three favorite books– I know you listed…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Livia
“I’m sorry,” she looked sympathetically at Lukas. “I know how you feel…I mean, not seeing your sibling. I had an older sister too…but she died a couple years ago. She was killed when the Pythonos raided our town…our family’s never been the same.” she stared at the floor and felt a pang of grief, but managed to keep control…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’ve noticed that my story could probably take place somewhere else and not a lot would change.
Honestly…I’m not exactly sure why that’s a problem XD I mean…technically…any story can be taken out of it’s original setting and put somewhere else, with only a few little tweaks. I could easily move my story to Earth, get rid of A…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Conlangs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
This so cool y’all! Bbut I have never even touched conlang before… Not sure if I’d have the patience. XD Maybe I’ll try it someday…
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’mma just put my question here cuz I don’t want to make a whole new topic for it….
Hey guys!!
So I’ve been struggling lately with incorporating my setting into the story. I’ve noticed that my story could probably take place somewhere else and not a lot would change. Obviously some things would, but the story isn’t really connected enough to t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Lukas
“I can’t remember,” Lukas said, relieved she hadn’t commented on his fumbling. Did he really have only one brother now? “Everton’s over there.” He pointed across the room to the young man with dark brown hair. Lukas couldn’t help but chuckle to himself when he saw how Ev’s face seemed to light up as he danced around t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Yep, I am being afraid… 🫥 *hides*
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Esther replied to the topic Hi, Peoples! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
Now some tags for people to say hi…
@freedomwriter76 @rae @thearcaneaxiom @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @my-brain-is-broken @anyone-else-idk-XDD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
Allison missed all the fun 🙁
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 2 years, 7 months ago
BE AFRAID! BE VERY AFRAID!
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Esther replied to the topic Hi, Peoples! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 7 months ago
Welcome to Kingdom Pen!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!! I’ve written fantasy and my current WIP is light dystopian, but I have ideas in a myriad of different genres that I’m excited to write in the future.
Oki! Time to learn more about…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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