Beth

@savannah_grace2009

Great chapters! I love the way you described this

worry striking a searing flame in the pit of her stomach.

And I love Cassian and Lilitu’s relationship. 🥰

@ellette-giselle
Wow, it looks great!! Thank you so much!!!

@anyone-who-wishes-to-read

Chapter 7

Rage

Pain.

A distant, ever present throbbing at the base of Lilitu’s neck.

On your feet, he warned himself, or you’re dead. He put his weight on his bad foot and screamed in agony before he could stifle it.

Blue blood oozed from his numerous cuts, the edges searing like fire.

Lilitu scrambled back to…[Read more]

@jonas

you want an em dash instead of a hyphen

Noted. Thank you!!!

Maybe this will be explained at some point, but it isn’t clear why the Paynes being moved to this new district would mean she doesn’t see them anymore, did they just move to completely different areas?

She doesn’t see them anymore because both she and them are always working, the…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Let me think….yEs PlEaSe HeLp Me 😭😭😭

If you’re busy though, that’s fine no worries!

@rae

Sef

“You’re like my mom.”

She caught Chase staring, and giggled.

“Is that a good thing or a bad thing?”

She stroked the bird with her finger again.

@calyhuge

Sounds great XD I’m kinda excited!!!

@rae

Omc I’m so sorry…give me a second…I forgot AND I’ve been on a break for four days :/

@highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @anyone-else-who-was-going-to-enter

Just so you know, I will be giving my thoughts and pronounce the winner between 10-12 today by EST time. If you are going to post your drawings, plz do it before then. If for some reason you can’t post them before that time today, just let me know and I’ll postpone my judging…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Your welcome 🙂

“Sorry, my Bible has ads.” -someone at my church

She was using a Bible app on her phone at evening service

@freed_and_redeemed

I’ve been playing with a new art style and got bored this afternoon, so I decided to draw Leon and Riker. Hope you like it!

@ellette-giselle

Wow, it looks awesome!

@ellette-giselle

Oh, wow, awesome! I didn’t know you could do that 😅. It sounds really interesting! Okay, I’ll let you know if I decide to!

What is it called?

@ellette-giselle

Congratulations on publishing your novel! Is it through Amazon, or what? What’s it about?

Okay, awesome! Thanks!

@whalekeeper

I LOVE it! Thank you so much!

@highscribeofaetherium

Relax.

I’m not gonna judge anything until a little before noon on Thursday. If you can’t finish it by tomorrow, don’t sweat, you have until Thurs.

Let’s try that again . . . @ellette-giselle