@beth-torres
Active 2 days, 23 hours ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 3 hours ago
Alrighty, I read over the next two chapters and decided to post them both today, but after this, you can expect to get only one a week… unfortunately, I only have six more chapters after this. 🙁 I guess that means I need to write more haha.
Without further ado, here’s the link! (It’s the same one as last time …[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 3 hours ago
Awesome! Thank you so much! That was something I really tried to pay attention to, because I come from a Christian family and I’ve never known a time where my parents didn’t know God… so it’s something I have to think about, how someone who’s never been exposed to this kind of thing would react to it. If you or anyone else has…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 4 hours ago
Alpha
Alpha chuckled. “Honestly, not much else. I’ve been bored out of my mind, hence playing with the knife.” Alpha’s hand glowed and he made the knife travel around the room before hovering over his shoulder again. “From getting stabbed in the lung to not having anything to do, life is crazy,” Alpha commented with a sigh, making his…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 18 hours ago
Thanks!!! ☺️
Thank you ladies! Sure thing!!
Wait really?? Oh I didn’t even notice! Maybe I’ll have to read the book now 😝
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hybridlore posted an update 5 days, 19 hours ago
@ellette-giselle How’s everything with you? Is your leg doing better?
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 days, 20 hours ago
@raxforge (you haven’t read this one yet) @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @hybridlore
So, I haven’t finished this one yet, but it’s getting long so I’m gonna post it in two parts.
Also, I posted a section of this story above, and I will be making that section bold so that those who already read it can skip with ease.
With that, i…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 days, 20 hours ago
I just realized that the reply I wrote for you didn’t post. Sorry.
He caught pneumonia, at least, that’s what I wrote his symptoms to fit, I never officially name it in the story.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 23 hours ago
Awesome! Thanks so much for reading it! I’m looking forward to hearing what you think of the rest of it.
Good point, I hadn’t noticed that, but it totally makes sense. I’m planning to rewrite the first chapter anyway, so I’ll try to take that into account when I do.
Wow, that’s terrible. That kind of thing hasn’t happened to…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 4 hours ago
Yeah . . . @kathleenramm You okay?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 4 hours ago
Yayyy!!! The moodboards look great!! 😊
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HighScribe replied to the topic Book Review: Tress of the Emerald Sea in the forum Book Discussions 6 days, 4 hours ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator
I ran out of time writing a reply, so I’ll get to this a bit later.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character commissions!! in the forum Art 6 days, 4 hours ago
but it’s so good!!
Oh, thanks (:
Do you have a description/list of the rest of his clothing since not much of it is visible?
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 6 hours ago
Ok SO IT DID POST THE MOODBOARD
Wyoh was tricking me…I couldn’t see the moodboard until now 😑😂
@theducktator @grcr @savannah_grace2009
Eeee! I’m so glad y’all are interested!! <33
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HighScribe replied to the topic Book Review: Tress of the Emerald Sea in the forum Book Discussions 6 days, 16 hours ago
(I know you were talking to Linus, but I thought I’d reply to you anyway, hope you don’t mind)
I’ve read Yumi atNP and I quite enjoyed it. It’s a bit more, eh, risque (?) that Tress, so I’m not sure how you’d feel about that. There’s nothing really ‘bad‘ that I remember, but I can elaborate more if you’d like.
(also, I have…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character commissions!! in the forum Art 6 days, 16 hours ago
Oh no my old art has returned to haunt me 😱
Sure! I should be able to draw you one tomorrow (depending on the medium). Would you like a pencil drawing or alcohol marker and pen? (marker might take me a bit longer). And you can give me a description of the character you’d like.
Also, I’m really sorry, I just realized I never…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 18 hours ago
Really? Aw I’m so glad!!! <333
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 18 hours ago
Aww I’m so sorry
I can imagine how you feel even if I don’t know what it’s like…and even though I won’t ever feel what you feel, that makes me so sad
Ahhh I get it
I’m sorry (I feel like I’ve said that a million times *cries*)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 18 hours ago
Umm, it’s a lot worse than rudeness. They can be pretty cruel.
Yeah, that’s what I meant, I just couldn’t think of the right word XD
I didn’t mean to sound like I was brushing you off…I know I’m using more mild words but that’s not really what I mean if that makes sense.
and shutting down isn’t an option when you’re the oldes…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 18 hours ago
Awww I’m sorry🥺😕😭
I can’t say I relate, but I can understand how hard that must be!!!
When people bother me like that or I’m in a situation like that I tend to just shut down, go to my room and not come out unless absolutely necessary lol
People drain me so bad XDXD
But yeah, just hearing about that is stressing me out…I…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 19 hours ago
@ellette
hey…y’all are right next door to me XDXD
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@hybridlore
Thank you so much for reaching out!! Thst means so much to me!
Eh, my leg hasnt had much chance yo heal because of all the travel. But, i did run for the forst time since the inj. Wes through a snowball at me and i couldnt res pelting him for it. 😅
Lot of stress because of the legal fight. Im just hon really ready to go home. Gotta…[Read more]
Of course! I miss talking with you! After asking that, I stalked the forums for a bit and saw that you had posted about being there. I’m sorry it’s been so rough! I’ll be praying that your leg continues to heal and everything gets sorted out and you can get home soon! Hopefully you and your family can be a light to your extended family members.
Thank you for the prayers. Having people reach and actually Care has been a really great encouragement. Thank you so much. I miss you too, which is funny because it’s not like I’m any farther or closer to you than normal. Feel free to email anytime. Thanks again.
Absolutely. I know, haha, it’s just we haven’t really talked lately. We’ll have to set up another Google Meet once you get back. Sure thing! 💕