@beth-torres
Active 1 week ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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RAE replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Sorry, you’re gonna have to put up with our numerous off-topic conversations!
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
I miss this rp SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!
The spot where it gets super chaotic is page 247-285 ish I think????
Plz ignore anything Latin things going on. It was purposefully not the way Latin is really, but it still is pretty bad.
Also, ignore these ending pages (the 350’s and such). we kinda turned this rp back to what it was…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
I’m in, though idk how I’m gonna keep up with two RPs, seeing that I can’t keep up with the one I’m in right now 😑🫣
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Almost tagged myself XD the stupid things I do.
Alpha
“I am Alpha Grath. I was returning from giving something to my sister when I heard a man saying something to a student. Something along the lines of coming with him somewhere I think, I didn’t pay much attention to what he said, only the way he said it. He was acting…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Lol
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RAE replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
I’m in!
@raxforge @kefa @the_lost-journal
For all the new ppl looking into Character Party, you should find the part where the castle was burning down, the queen was almost killed, the villains were running rampant, the charries were squabbling and Prince Fennin was trying to hold everything together…cuz I think that was our most…[Read more]
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RAE started the topic I'd like some thoughts on this scene in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
So…this is a scene that I wrote at like 11:00 last night. It hasn’t been edited so sorry if it’s a total mess.
I’m not looking for any particular things like grammar and such, I’d just kinda like whatever feedback you can give me. Maybe how the scene effected you? Idk. Anyways, this is from Chapter 19…
Ash. Thick and heavy in the air, coating…
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Alpha
“What I meant by ‘at bay’ is keeping it under control, as on keeping it from exploding out in a sudden uncontrollable burst. I’ll explain more later. For now, I believe that masked woman is here to ask us some questions.”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Alpha
Alpha raised a black eyebrow, studying Rax up and down as if he had never seen him before. He held out his hand and grasped Rax’s wrist.
“We do do something similar to a handshake. I was simply being rude. I apologize.” Alpha bowed his head. “My name is Alpha Grath. So you’re a fire elemental who also can heal, that means you…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle The marriage theme story sounds really interesting! If you post any more of it, I’d love to read it!
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
In Realn culture, you grab wrists, I think I showed you that before, so alpha should have accepted Rax’s hand anyways. He was just being purposefully rude for whatever reason.
he’ll probably apologize later…and he’ll also ask about Rax’s power and maybe even share a demonstration of his if Rax can convince…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @ellette-giselle @koshka
alpha
Alpha stood, still not accepting the man’s hand. “Don’t feel sorry about it. I like throwing knives at people, and since you were making comments about possibly being able to save that man if you were there, I figured you somehow knew him, and were after Silvia too. Speaking of the poor girl,…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @koshka @ellette-giselle
Alpha
“I already called them after the man was killed. It surprises me that they haven’t arrived yet.”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@raxforge @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka
Alpha
Alpha knocked away the guy’s hand. “Firstly, I didn’t murder in cold blood. The man was holding a knife to that little girl’s throat, so I killed him to save her. If I had murdered him, I would have killed Silvia too, then gone looking for my sister and killed her. It is the sad truth that if…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @ellette-giselle @koshka
Alpha
“Sorry, can’t promise you I won’t fight…or be a danger. Those follow me like stray kittens.”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@raxforge @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka
Alpha
“Oh, yeah, the guy who wants to kill me wants to heal me too. Totally not suspicious that he wants me to let down my guard.”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@koshka @raxforge @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper
Alpha
As his fighting opponent apologized to Marcel, Alpha leaned again against the wall. His heart rate had elevated, his breathing was labored, and dizzyness and nausea was beginning to set in.
“To answer your question, I mortally wounded him because he had a knife to Silvia’s throat. They were…[Read more]
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RAE posted an update 1 month ago
I can tell the difference between fantasy and reality, but sometimes I don’t want to.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Well…now it’s longer
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