SIR FRANKENFURT the 3RD

@the-lost_journal

Aww I’m sorry, I get it <3

Hope your day gets better, praying for you!

@highscribeofaetherium

Kool! That sounds like fun!

I’m 15.

Finally someone my age! (Or a year older at least)

I relate to this sentence lol.

SAME :[)

Also, your signature is funny.

You find words of wisdom funny???? (LOL, thanks!)

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks… : )

@theducktator

thank you

@keilah-h

kk, I’ll keep that in mind!

Also to you three, I had a rough day (Also to anyone who reads this) So if, in advance, if I snap at anyone on here, I am so so so so os osososooossososososo sorry! I hope that won’t happen, and I hope I don’t upsets anyone…. But that usually…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @raxforge

Good, I mean, bad news. The scanner I use to scan the pictures into the computer isn’t working rn so…no art rn.

@highscribeofaetherium

Okay, thx

@savannah_grace2009

Very well done scene!

It’s also a major plot twist lol

@everyone

What do you guys think of this scene….

It’s kind of messy but it’s also supposed to be that way, like it’s a flashback…I’m trying to make it a little confusing, but not too much.

When Nami dared to open her eyes, she breathed a sigh of relief.

The men were gone.

Tigin had screamed at her, threatening her with matches and a…

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@the_lost-journal

YAYYYYY you’re back!!!!!

*throws confetti*

@keilah-h
Aww tysmmm

@lightoverdarkness6

Girl thank you so much <333

@the_lost-journal

It’s a weekend camp some people from my church go to every year. It’s in winter, so that’s why it’s called snow camp (though it doesn’t seem like there’s gonna be any snow this year :/). I’m leaving tomorrow.

I’m 15.

I don’t like math so I didn’t care to do it!( ^-^)

I relate to this sentence lol.

Also, your signature is funny.

@rae

Alright! I’ll try to get some feedback to you later today, it might take a bit.

@linus-smallprint

NOOOOOOO! Why does everyone have to be so old on here :[

@the_lost-journal

No worries!

@highscribeofaetherium

Sentenced by sentence would be greatly appreciated.

@highscribeofaetherium

What is snow camp? Is it like summer camp? Also let me guess your age!

17-18!!!!

(I am literally just saying that because like, around 90% of people on here are that age! I might be wrong, I don’t like math so I didn’t care to do it!( ^-^)

@jonas

Sorry I haven’t gotten back! I still would enjoy this!  I just feel as if my charries get to do nothing lol!

Jirah, Rosemary and Rapha (Elderstand deep waters) (I think thats the name…. LOL)

“Help!” Rosemary called out, struggling to stay above the rough waters. “Don’t panic. You’re all right.” Rapha calmly swam towards her and g…[Read more]

@rae

I read the first part, and this is great! Are you looking more for a sentence-by-sentence critique, or just overall feedback?

Today if I can.

@jonas

Ok, I’ll try to do something, hopefully before Snow Camp.