@beth-torres
Active 15 hours, 29 minutes ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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HighScribe replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
I really like it, you did a really nice job!
Although I would bring up the same thing as Jonas, about the setting and stuff.
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Ruth replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
I apologize if I missed any italicized words.
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Ruth started the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 3 months ago
@theducktator @theshadow @loopylin @whalekeeper @grcr @keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @otherkppeoplewelcome
So i wrote most of this short story (titled Secret Shame) this morning. I think I might end up turning it into a novella of some kind just because I feel like it is kinda rushed. What are your…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 3 months ago
I have two choices to submit to KP, a somewhat lighthearted tale with Nahim and his family on his birthday, or a darker story with a character you haven’t met before.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
but don’t worry, it’s just molting, it’ll grow a new shell soon.
*chokes on coffee*
Bwahahahahaha that’s hilarious 🤣🤣🤣😂😅😂😆😂😂🤣😆😆😆😆😆🤣 -
Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Yeah, I think I did my math wrong, it should be closer to like their third movie.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
😭😭😖😩😭😞 (*sad noises*) 😖😖😭😭😭😭😩😭
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh, I like your scene! It’s sweet (: I don’t think it’s cringey.
Although I do have one question. How is it only ten-thirty at night if they’re on their FIFTH movie? If each one was somewhere from an hour and a half to two hours, they would have had to have started in early to mid afternoon?
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Because I got bored…
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @loopylin
This is a Chase scene I wrote a little while ago, i think near the end of last year. Sorry, it’s really cringy. Chase is around 14 or so.
Sarah Marshall brushed the brown lock of hair that had escaped her pony tail out of her eye. A…
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I just read that scene and…I’m now gonna cry for both my boi Nahim who also was in a similar place once and Riker…and I have my own tissue box this time, so I’ll pass them to you too.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Yay! Now I need their addresses so I can send them Clover and Giraffy! Along with some hugs ofc!
And…I can’t find my tape measure and wrench…
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed Aragorn, Faramir, Legolas, Gandalf is next!
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@rae ooh, are those your favs??👀
My favs have to be Aragorn, Legolas, Pippin, and Faramir 🤍-
Actually I meant profile pic order.
My fav list is Aragorn, Gandalf, the four hobbits, Faramir, Legolas and Gimli together, Boromir.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
No, Riker needs a soft white bunny rabbit…Clover worked for me and my nightmares, she’ll work for Riker too
If Riker doesn’t get that wound taken care of in the next five minutes, I’m going to build a time machine and go back to take care of it myself! And he’s not allowed to argue!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
Indeed.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
Unsee. UNSEE. 🫣

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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh dear, yes.
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Ruth replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 3 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
If you noticed, I missed the deadline too. It just ended up being posted anyways because I thought I had said the 16th. Oh, well.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
… aaaand I missed the deadline, didn’t I?
*smashes head against the wall*
Augh! I completely forgot about this and I really wanted to do this one!Ah well 😔
I read your story but I don’t think I’m supposed to say anything about it yet.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
 (and Broken Shackles is over 46k now and almost 300 pages!!!🥳)
Whooooo 🥳👏👏
Also…
LEON! NOOOOOOOOOO JUST LISTEN TO ISAIAH! 😭
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Wish Riker the best of luck, because he’s going to need it😬
Freedom, WHAT are you planning NOW?
Good luck, Riker!
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