Beth

@freedomwriter76

Thanks, it has taken hours of headaches to come up with this stuff.

I can’t wait to see your stuff!

@esther-c

What’s the first paragraph of your book?

You’re being a little to ambiguous. I can’t answer your questions until I can glean more data.

Sorry I couldn’t really help. 🙁

@esther-c

Oof, those are hard questions. For the first one, I get what you mean. I think for the first chapter, an introduction is fine. Personally, I would try to focus on the relationship between Ami and Ev, and his family conflict, because I think that will hook the reader.
And then, themes are also really hard. Could you describe yours a…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas

I feel like we should make up a meme for ending of this monumental duel.

I’d love some help if you guys have any tips or advice to contribute 👆😊

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @hybridlore @whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @euodia-vision @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae @thearcaneaxiom @anyone-else!

I don’t want to make a whole other topic for this, so I’m posting my question(s) here. XD

So, I’m having some trouble editing my WIP. (This is not my NaNo WIP. I was ahead on NaNo, so I decided to do some editing today). Originally, the first chapter wasn’t the most exciting. It was more a slice-of-life kind of thing that introduces who one of…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Bye, see you later!

@rae

I have to go now, bye.`

@highscribeofaetherium

Nahim

“Peace?” Zahlin asked, lifting his forearm and pushing Nahim’s blade away from his neck. He lowered his Sword slightly. “You look like you’re half-dead with fatigue.”

Nahim put his blade inches from Zahlin’s stomach, ready for any last trick. He panted, his vision blurring off and on. Yeah, he was tired.

H…[Read more]

@jonas

I’m not huge into  Star Wars either, especially the recent stuff. I much prefer other movies. Especially considering music! Whoever thought the Star Wars music was cool? (Besides the theme)

@rae

Zahlin

Zahlin sidestepped Nahim’s lunge. The Sword spoke for the first time since the fight had broken out. “ONE OF YOU RUN FOR FENNIN! NOW!” It shouted at the two onlookers. Out of the corner of his eye Zahlin saw someone disappear out the door.

Zahlin caught Nahim’s arm and slammed him into the anvil. Nahim twisted, leveling his blade a…[Read more]

@jonas

CRYSTAL SWORDS, The weapon of Thurston.

Twelve-year-old Nahim cast little bits of metal and crystal across a rough floor in disgust. He hung his head, every minute of free time he had gone to his little private hiding hole and labored over this project for months, and yet he had no progress to show it. He figured a last piece of red…[Read more]

@jonas

Hold on…I think I can quickly grab something on crystal swords…

@jonas

Short answer: no.

Long answer: The shape and color of a crystal sword is determined by the color and sometimes shape of the “baby crystal”. They come in all colors and multicolors, with the Realn Emperor’s looking like you took the Arken Stone and turned it into a sword (descriptions from book and movie). Nahim used to use only red, then…[Read more]

@rae

Ah, those were the good ol’ days…

@highscribeofaetherium

Yeah! Lol! The good ol’ days when our characters didn’t have blurred vision and weren’t bleeding!

Lag…ugh tech!

@rae

Lol and a couple days ago we were talking about how to make them fight each other 😅