@beth-torres
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, that makes sense. I’m just trying to get through the first draft XD I can’t think about other books!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
There we go! That was very, very unnecessary and complicated so sorry Jonas! Anyways….I blame Wyoh. She needs to find a better outlet for all her built up anger than eating posts XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Plot Points
https://www.masterclass.com/articles/how-to-use-plot-points-to-write-a-compelling-story
Hopefully Wyoh doesn’t eat it this time!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
The links:
Three Act Structure
https://www.masterclass.com/articles/how-to-write-three-act-structure
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
I personally prefer plot points to the 3 Act, but that’s just me. Anyway, another thing I do is keep a notebook beside my bed at all times (except now because it’s currently in my locker at school). I usually get most inspiration when I’m trying to fall asleep, so that’s what works for me. It really helps me to work out my ideas on paper rather…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Plotting.
Plotting and I go way back. (way back as in a month ago)
I went from not plotting at all (which is a horrible idea by the way) to plotting a lot more. Anyway, here’s how I plot. I haven’t plotted a bunch, but from what I’ve done, here’s what I do. I use the 3 Act Structure for plotting, and plot points. I’ll post the links for the “how…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
I’ll just post it in chunks.
Ummm why is this so complicated???? I keep trying to post this but it won’t let me!!!!! So I have to do this instead.
Well. I just typed out a response…and Wyoh came and ate it. I guess she’s hungry today.
(or maybe we offended her in some way)Anyway, I shall type it out again.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
It says I posted, but it won’t show up. It’s weird.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Have you maybe already done a post that’s the same in this thread? It doesn’t let you do duplicates.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Why is it not working? I can’t post what I want to post, but everything else is working!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh, so now it decides to work!!!!!!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
My post isn’t posting!!!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Aww Fennin and his mother <333 that’s so sweet!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Lukas better look out…Chase fed Xandro sugar…and Xandro on sugar is scary…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Forcing Chase to dance would traumatize him…that’s what happened with the mall. If he feels forced in any way he’ll never want to do it again.
FYI Chase is fifteen rn, I personally don’t have problems with three-year age gaps but I know some ppl do. I’m willing to do whatever works best.
We are NOT killing Fynn, also Chase isn’t the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@calyhuge @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelse
Fennin
With the directions given to him, Fennin shot like a bullet, running to his mother. He saw her,face paler than usual, lying on Nahim’s lap, gently cradled. He paid no attention to Nora or Kate, but was at his mother’s side. He talked to her gently in Lillening, and caressed her cheek…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Hey, is it your birthday today? I saw on your profile! HAPPY BIRTHDAY! 🙂 hope your day is amazing! (iit’s not your birthday, ignore this XD)
Livia
“Oh, no,” she shook her head, “None taken. I just hope he doesn’t think I like him. That would be awkward.”
“No kidding,” Callista laughed.
“Though if Xandro thinks he’s the one for m…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
When ya get on here, if you can’t find the pov from Fennin, let me know. Also, even though Fennin moved on his conversation, you can still have your charries ask questions and stuff. Whatever works 🙂
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Chase Duke
“So are you planning to come to the dance, Chase?”
Chase bit his lip. He didn’t even really know how to act under casual settings, what would happen under formal ones?
“I-I’ve n-never d-danced in my life. B-besides I-I have no one t-to go with.” He also had never worn a suit except once…and that was a suit of paj…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Hey, I need some help.
So I’ve got this charrie, “Name long and complicated but just called me Abe.” And I need a back story for him.
He likes to lift people up, like his friend Rain, who seems almost always upset with herself. He laughs and jokes. Very nice character, the type that makes every one love him…but I want his back story. Any ideas?
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