Beth

I really enjoyed reading everyone’s posts! I’m just guessing here, but I feel like brown is the most popular hair color, followed by blonde and black… And then other colors like white and blue lol.

For eyes, I’m going to guess blue is most common for characters? Then brown, then green, and then other colors?

I’m not really sure what kinds of…[Read more]

@freedmwriter76

My MC’s tend to be men (idk, they’re easier to write somehow🤣)

I’m not alone!

Kalary

“I’m not insane, and I told you, I don’t know.” Kal said, crossing her arms.

Kalary

“Are you asking for a definition?” Kalary asked, “I can get one for you. Let’s see… Combat. Noun. 1.Fighting between armed forces. Science. Noun. 1. The systematic study of the structure and behavior of the physical and natural world through observation, experimentation, and the testing of theories against the evidence obtained. Anything else?”

Kalary

Kalary eyed them both askance. “I actually know exactly what I’m talking about, I was top of the class in combat science. And where is this ‘Wond’? I don’t think there’s anywhere that doesn’t have gun technology yet.”

@rae

My charries almost never have colored hair or makeup, probably because 1, I mostly write fantasy so it would seem really out of place for someone or have blue hair, and 2, I have zero internet in smearing wax and powder all over my face aka makeup, so I usually forget it exists lol.

@hybridlore

Yeah, I get it now! It’s simply the power of resistance and the fact that none of the other Paynes know that they’re being lied to. So Sef will have to confront her lies in a more obvious way than most books.

Yep! Exactly.

That makes sense! And yeah, definitely don’t feel like you have to take any of my advice… It’s totally up to you…

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I never really go into dyed hair, most of it’s their natural color, I even cringed when I had Terry Darr dye his hair blond for a couple weeks. Reason: I actually promised my grandmother I would never dye my hair.

I also rarely go into makeup with my charries too. Reason: idk, maybe cuz most of them are warrioresses, or too young in my opinion to…[Read more]

Chase Duke

“I’m sorry I bothered you.”

Marcel rushed out of the shop, and slammed the door behind him. Chase sat alone, stunned. What did I do? He remained there for a few minutes, before rushing out himself. Marcel was nowhere in sight. What did I do?! Frantic, Chase pulled his hoodie over his head and made for the city streets. He thought h…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

What is wrong with Seb? Does he have mental issues or something?

@savannah_grace2009

Don’t worry, my first draft was very dumb. If you ever want to see what a doodling, cursive-writing twelve-thirteen year old does when they have no idea how to write q book, go look at it.

It’s painful for me to read even the first sentences!

@scoutfinch180

This chapter really hooked me! I’d love to see where it goes!

Thanks, I like strong beginnings and endings when reading, so I try to do that 🙂

What themes/messages are you pursuing?

It’s kinda a “coming back” story mainly. Nahim doubts God (called Ehyeh) a lot, questions Him, so on. Nahim is a Christian, but rn, he’s having a t…[Read more]

@rae @jonas

I’ve never written something that makes me cry…But then again I don’t usually cry reading anything.

Well…hehe….I once wrote a dumb story (last spring) about these kids. One of the older brothers got pushed off a water tower (it’s dumb okay???) and I wrote the siblings grieving over him….I actually started tearing up and almos…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Yeah, I really need to get going again on my Realn grammar. I have random words, some essential rules, and an alpha bet that needs work, but otherwise nothing.

I think I’m gonna have Nahim have one of his nightmares…idk why, I just feel like it. Besides, a warrior yelling and writhing in his sleep is…not normal, and may cause an amount of chaos.

@calyhuge what do you think?

@calyhuge

Chase Duke

“Never been to a dance… what kind of a horrid, dismal, uncultured place does he come from?”

Chance started, and looked over the the other table, his eyes going jet black. He had forgotten their existence. The boy wearing round glasses and faint ink stains went on, ranting about something Chase didn’t understand. He move…[Read more]

Gunslinger

“Madam, I believe he comes from a place called ‘Wond’. They don’t have guns yet.”

Gunslinger has gone to Wond (C and R crossover) when it was in it’s former SA, haven’t decided on the updated age.

@whalekeeper

ChaseDuke

“You’re just depressing yourself, dude.”

“You think I want to be this way? I wear dark clothes because I don’t like bright colors, they stand out too much.” The truth: they reminded him of his mom. “I’ve tried to change, I even went to a couple of those…religious meeting things with the Marshalls. I tried making schoo…[Read more]