Beth

@jonas @rae

I added a few sentences that hopefully resolve it a little better? I’m not sure. Do you still think it’s missing something?

… I can’t believe I didn’t see it before—who he was. The suspicion has grown inside of me for weeks, strengthening with each day that passed. When the guards disappeared from the marketplace. When the curfe…

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@jonas

Look up, I botched your simple tag.

@jomas @highscribeofaetherium

A menthol is what a cough drop is called. It’s on the couch drop bags in the stores.

@jonas

I’m pretty sure it’s an ingredient in cough drops??

@jonas

Paper isn’t allowed, but non-gun weapons are.

Well, at my Dad’s work, menthols aren’t allowed places, yet he always has a razor knife in his pocket.

@rae

Alright! XD Thanks, I appreciate it.

@loopylin

I think Gregory would definiately interrogate Junior, since Junior has an unregistered pet and boots already! This could get interesting!

I wish to join this thing as well!!

@hybridlore

My thoughts are the same as Jonas, but a horse “pen” is correctly called a stall. If the horse is in a field outside, or a fenced in area, it’s called a paddock. If you need horsey terms, just tag me.

@grcr

Got it!

@jonas

Yeah, I knew it was pretty obvious. I’m not sure how else to write it (where it’s not obvious) in such a short word count.
So, yeah. As soon as I posted it I was like, oh, I need to add something that talks about how the rules/guards have been changed. Really when I wrote it I was thinking it’d have a few more scenes, but then when I got…[Read more]

@grcr

Ugh, I know, that’s the worst. Maybe try Nameberry? I usually go there for names.

@smiley

Peter gave a look of confusion which Pietro replied with a narrowing of his eyes. “They’re my chocolates.”

“Pietro.” Hannah gave the “look” that Pietro had known forever. “Let the kid have a chocolate.”

“These are rare Sokoivan chocolates, do you know how hard they are to find?”

“They’re hersheys just written in Sokovian,” Wanda argue…

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@grcr

I like it! Blair and Blaine are really similar names, though. That might get confusing, unless it’s intentional?

@jonas

Is it more like the word “real”, but with the ‘l’ cut off and “eln” stuck on?

yes, I believe you could say that.

I’m probably always going to read it in my head as “realm” with an n (nothing sounds wrong about that to me) just cause that’s how it looks.

That makes sense. It just sounds wrong to me because my most successful way of m…[Read more]

@koshka This is really beautiful!

@jonas

Thank you for your thoughts.

I don’t really understand pronunciations that well, I know how it should sound in English, and I know how it should sound in Realn (for in reality, all the pronunciations are off, since the Realn language often adds sounds to words that are not represented in the word itself.) mainly because of accents and…[Read more]

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @beth-torres

someone else rp, I don’t really have anything. This is our last rp:

Gunslinger

As the bits of bomb inside the bubble broke apart a centimeter a minute, Gunslinger turned around, flipping a switch on his gun and shooting over several heads to blast a hole in the opposite wall.