Beth

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok, so I love him already. XD Probably because I have a character similar to him in some ways.

I really got a feel for his personality… thoughtful, quiet, mature. Those are the things that first came to mind. I’m not sure what else to say, lol. XD But his voice is definitely different from your other characters, so tha…[Read more]

Can’t believe I didn’t catch this the first read-through

 maybe he brought a pet with him

Mayfly a pet! 🤣🤣🤣 For some reason that’s just really funny! I like it👍

@keilah-h

Silvanis

“Oh, it’s a little wingless creature, kind of like you.”

Was that an insult? Silvanis didn’t pay attention to the rest of what Jaylen and the other dragon were saying. I’m nothing like that little girl! Our hair isn’t even the same color! 

Silvanis put his hand on the wall and used his other arm to pull his knife from the…[Read more]

@theducktator

Aw, pics aren’t fixed yet? 🙁

@trailblazer

Yeah, I’m glad it’s working again. I was seriously worried.

@theducktator

He’s cute. XD.

Never expected that reaction…XD

One thing though, usually when people smile I only see one row of teeth.

True. Though, I was known for a ridiculously large smile when I was little(r) so large both rows were at least partly visible. And that one stupid canine tooth that grew faster than my other teeth that for a w…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

To clarify, this scene comes before the last one I shared.

Mandin already knew Nahim was a Nayhelm, that’s why he showed the article to Mandin. He’s also being casual because for one he’s tired, he got very little sleep, and for two, he hasn’t promised to tell Mandin yet, and Mandin often asks him every few days/weeks in tiny s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @myself @whoever

I didn’t forget! (Completely. Had a lot of stuff going on in my house, so it kinda got pushed on the back burner for the last few days) I have been thinking of a goal. Unfortunately, my previous plans all include at least a singular villain as my stories usually go. I do not want this…[Read more]

@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium

Skin walkers are from Native American mythology. If I remember correctly, they are cursed men/spirits who can shape shift into creepy animals. They harm humans, and while having a human form, their human form doesn’t look totally human. But the scariest thing at all is how hushhush the Natives are about them. The…[Read more]

@theducktator

Lol that first one XD

@keilah-h

I honestly don’t know much about them (I believe they’re from Native American mythology or something?), but the name instantly makes me think of the last place on the planet I’d ever want to go: Skinwalker Ranch (land of cryptid and UFO sightings, immortal zombie wolves, and balls of light that melt your dog [I really wish I was making…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

(and I was over here excited, like: HEYYY, RIKER PLAYS VIOLIN!! XD)

He doesss?? Me too!! XD How long has he played?

(Dude, it sounds like I’m talking about a real person. XD Actually, I was giving an analogy in youth group the other day and I noticed that I started talking about characters like they were real people. I had t…[Read more]

@theducktator

I know right??!!

@freed_and_redeemed

I think you probably already thought of this, but Eric would probably try to frame Riker. Get Riker on everyone’s bad side.

Steal cigarettes and put them in Riker’s stuff. Dirty uniforms and leave some trace of Riker behind. Rummage belongings. That kinda stuff.

I think that could go under three of the bullet notes you have,…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @keilah-h @theducktator

 
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@highscribeofaetherium @freed_and_redeemed @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @keilah-h @theducktator @whoever-cares

Yeah, I’m bothering everyone again. I like the idea of this scene, but I feel like it has some major problems. I want to see if any of you notice it, since I’ve found more than once that I stress over things that others are like “…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Your post didn’t post

@loopylin

I love that. Looks amazing.