Beth

@grcr

Thanks!! 😊

@mineralizedwritings

I’d take any advice. I’m very much not happy with my art no matter how good people think it is, so anything to help that would be welcomed.

(Btw, I really like your style.)

@rae

I think you’re a bit too hard on yourself, it’s pretty good. Realistic drawing is hard. Sure, there are some things that could be fixed, but that’s how we learn, right?

@anyone

I just finished this map! What do you guys think?

Not super happy with some of the names, I made a lot of the cities up on the spot, but oh well 🤷‍♀️

(the date at the top is a liar, don’t listen to it :p)

Oh, and the collar is totally not good.

@whalekeeper

This is the drawing:

Sorry that it’s lopsided like that. I scanned it into our computer.

So, now you can see, the lightsource is totally off, the hair doesn’t sit right, the features aren’t clear, and jawline is too straight, the beard looks wrong…

It’s a person, just a messed up one.

@theducktator

🫣 that’s scary lol

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas

I’m not against trying, but I do think it’d be better if we just kept it HF.

@jonas @esther-c

I think if we combined them It’d just become steampunk.

@jonas

Yeah, I’m not that familiar with steampunk too, but it sounds fun, lol.

Yeahhh, I’m not sure how we could mix those two together. It’d end up being very interesting though! XD

@mineralizedwritings

In some sense, it was more book accurate. But the family shows no sign of being Christian, and the Christian sounding advice there mom gives them is cut out. And there’s the scene they added before Meg dies where Jo says “Jo’s will be done” when her sister questions if death is God’s will. I can’t think about the movie the s…

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@theshadow

I think everyone covered most of the bases! I don’t really have anything to add 🙃

I want to mention something in that season, but I don’t want to give away spoilers if you haven’t yet. 😉

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok so that scene just reminded me of something….

You’ve watched The Chosen right? Have you watched season four yet?

@freed_and_redeemed

So glad I could help!!

🫣😭 Noooo, Rikerrrrrr!!! Aghhh, from a writer’s perspective, yes, yes, yesss!! From a reader’s perspective, girlll nooooo.

😂

@theducktator

*sigh* Jonas is right. High fantasy did win. (I kinda wanted it to be steampunk… XD)

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @ducktator @grcr @loopylin @rae @whalekeeper @anyone-i-might-have-missed-sorryyy

Alrighty! The final count is in!

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