@beth-torres
Active 19 hours, 49 minutes ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
@anyone-who-wishes-to-read
Chapter 7
Rage
Pain.
A distant, ever present throbbing at the base of Lilitu’s neck.
On your feet, he warned himself, or you’re dead. He put his weight on his bad foot and screamed in agony before he could stifle it.
Blue blood oozed from his numerous cuts, the edges searing like fire.
Lilitu scrambled back to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
you want an em dash instead of a hyphen
Noted. Thank you!!!
Maybe this will be explained at some point, but it isn’t clear why the Paynes being moved to this new district would mean she doesn’t see them anymore, did they just move to completely different areas?
She doesn’t see them anymore because both she and them are always working, the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Sef
“You’re like my mom.”
She caught Chase staring, and giggled.
“Is that a good thing or a bad thing?”
She stroked the bird with her finger again.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
@highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @anyone-else-who-was-going-to-enter
Just so you know, I will be giving my thoughts and pronounce the winner between 10-12 today by EST time. If you are going to post your drawings, plz do it before then. If for some reason you can’t post them before that time today, just let me know and I’ll postpone my judging…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
Your welcome 🙂
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HighScribe posted an update 2 years, 1 month ago
@theducktator
Yay, you’re back! How was your vacation? -
Ruth replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
“Sorry, my Bible has ads.” -someone at my church
She was using a Bible app on her phone at evening service
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
I’ve been playing with a new art style and got bored this afternoon, so I decided to draw Leon and Riker. Hope you like it!

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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
Wow, it looks awesome!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
Oh, wow, awesome! I didn’t know you could do that 😅. It sounds really interesting! Okay, I’ll let you know if I decide to!
What is it called?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
Congratulations on publishing your novel! Is it through Amazon, or what? What’s it about?
Okay, awesome! Thanks!
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hybridlore changed their profile picture 2 years, 1 month ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
I LOVE it! Thank you so much!
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
Relax.
I’m not gonna judge anything until a little before noon on Thursday. If you can’t finish it by tomorrow, don’t sweat, you have until Thurs.
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hybridlore posted an update 2 years, 1 month ago
Surviving summer in the south 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
Let’s try that again . . . @ellette-giselle
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
@ellette_giselle
If you’re not too busy, I would love a drawing of one of my characters! The same one I gave Whaley, Noa Montero. I can post her description here in a minute…
Also, I can’t remember if I introduced myself before… sorry if I haven’t. I’m hybridlore, a homeschooled soon-to-be-junior and I write YA science fiction. It’s nice to…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@theshadow @keilah-h @princesachronicle22
Silvanis
Once he saw the creature, Silvanis instinctively pushed Fairy behind him. When she tried to step past him, he pushed her back, a pale glow coming to his right hand.
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It was amazing! We were in Roan Mountain, TN, at Fairhaven Ministries. We went on a lot of hikes, and slid down a waterfall, which we hadn’t done for several years. We also discovered a mountain disc golf course, which was incredibly fun, despite the fact we lost two discs and all got sunburned. We went to a place called Doe River Gorge too, which…[Read more]
That’s awesome, that sounds like so much fun!