@beth-torres
Active 14 hours, 12 minutes ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else
Okay….
I have come to a decision lol
I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.
Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
True.
Okay, that makes more sense. But why would William want to do that? What’s out there beside Ardenta? I get he’s coming from an emotionally unstable place, but it seems sort of random.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
*doubles over in agony*
Gahh! I’ve been struck! I’m dying! HELP ME SOMEONE!
I now have 650 words to write, and after that, you can bet you’ll be receiving a portion of my 26 snowballs (:<
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
*saves snowballs*
Throws two at @esther-c and @whaley
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
To everyone who threw snow at me:
I haven’t been on here in a hot second, sorry everyone!!!! Ahhh….
I actually did a TON of editing today, and I’m so obsessed with my writing!
I’m not going to post the part I worked on on KP, just because I feel like it could be too dark for some people (Idk though…) I promise it’s not super dark, but a…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
*adds you to my revenge list*
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
No. XD (Although that would be pretty funny if we didn’t know until now, LOL). I had just recently learned that y’all were related and guessing from the gibberish and the “PWR” at the end of the post, I figured it was Power. 😉😂
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Yeah, ok. Six MCs really isn’t terrible. I always find them interesting when they’re done well. (Not that I’ve specifically read any that didn’t do it well, buuut…. XD)
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Esther replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 8 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Hope your break is restful and profitable for you! Merry Christmas!!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Good section! And I like the boards. I’m interested to see what will happen now that they’re in the city again.
Two things:
The first thing that I noticed was… I forgot who William was. I thought he might be one of Amelia’s brothers 🫣, but I wasn’t sure. I think, with the amount of characters we have, especially the ones we’v…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
But tall people are already appreciated. They can reach stuff in the high cabinets.
From what I can find, June 22nd is National Tall People day, but there is no Appreciate Tall People day.
What I wanna know is if there’s an Appreciate Slightly Above Average Height People day.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
That’s some stunningly flawless reasoning you’ve got there.
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