Beth

@the_lost-journal

You find words of wisdom funny???? (LOL, thanks!)

lol you’re welcome.

@raxforge

My character, Kefa’s characters, and two of Jonas’ characters are on a boat on a river with some NPCs. They’re leaving the city.

@the-lost_journal

Aww I’m sorry, I get it <3

Hope your day gets better, praying for you!

@ellette-giselle @raxforge

Good, I mean, bad news. The scanner I use to scan the pictures into the computer isn’t working rn so…no art rn.

@highscribeofaetherium

Okay, thx

@savannah_grace2009

Very well done scene!

It’s also a major plot twist lol

@everyone

What do you guys think of this scene….

It’s kind of messy but it’s also supposed to be that way, like it’s a flashback…I’m trying to make it a little confusing, but not too much.

When Nami dared to open her eyes, she breathed a sigh of relief.

The men were gone.

Tigin had screamed at her, threatening her with matches and a…

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@the_lost-journal

YAYYYYY you’re back!!!!!

*throws confetti*

@keilah-h
Aww tysmmm

@lightoverdarkness6

Girl thank you so much <333

@the_lost-journal

It’s a weekend camp some people from my church go to every year. It’s in winter, so that’s why it’s called snow camp (though it doesn’t seem like there’s gonna be any snow this year :/). I’m leaving tomorrow.

I’m 15.

I don’t like math so I didn’t care to do it!( ^-^)

I relate to this sentence lol.

Also, your signature is funny.

@rae

Alright! I’ll try to get some feedback to you later today, it might take a bit.

@the_lost-journal

No worries!

@highscribeofaetherium

Sentenced by sentence would be greatly appreciated.

@rae

I read the first part, and this is great! Are you looking more for a sentence-by-sentence critique, or just overall feedback?

Today if I can.

@jonas

Ok, I’ll try to do something, hopefully before Snow Camp.

@theducktator

You know you’re a writer when a Francis Schaefer video is discussing what happens when there is no Christian base for science and you’re taking notes for a dystopian novel.

Lol. This just made my day a little brighter.

@ellette-giselle

Awwwwww 😭😭 But I feel like you’re using that as such a good plot device 🙈

@theducktator

In Indiana, you can start driver’s ed at 15.😎 I haven’t actually started yet though and I only just signed up.

Ohhh noiceee 😎 Yeah, I have to wait until I’m 15 1/2. 🤪 Which is both good and bad timing in this case. By the end of May I’ll reach that point, which means I can get my temps. I’ll have lots of time and opportunit…[Read more]