Beth

@ellette-giselle

Awesome, thanks!!

I wouldn’t call myself a source as far as plots and scenes but do have one thing to say

Additionally, I feel like I’m forcing my characters to do something without actually letting them decide

This sounds like you don’t know your characters well enough. Maybe work a little more on character development and getting comfy in your character cloak. W…[Read more]

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So… the first draft of Guardian Angels I literally started writing while waiting for a piano lesson, and I had no idea what I was doing. I still have no idea honestly. Apparently, my idea of ‘first draft’ is wing it.

And I currently only get motivation from my characters and someone very special so I have a lot of unfinished…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow

And y’all, you’re able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didn’t need super precise, line-by-line edits since I’m going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.

@theshadow

Thank you!!

@whalekeeper

Thanks!! So glad you like it! 😁 And hey, if you have tips, I know you’re the synesthesia expert so I would love your input (or advice) if you have any.

@savannah_grace2009 @the_lost-journal

Plus, the Bible requires two things if you want to read it. Context, and an open mind. You need history and context to even understand HALF, if not ALL of the Bible.

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Context and History is all in the Bible. Reading other passages helps you understand other passages.

I would like to add something about t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Another sign find. Immediately thought of you XD

@the_lost-journal

You should also go off teachings from the saints.

The Bible is the WORD OF GOD!!!!! How could anything people say be superior to that?

I understand that God gives people special revelations too, but they won’t contradict the Bible. As Christians we need to respect the Bible as the ultimate authority.

Plus, the Bible requires two…

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@linus-smallprint

Here is my expertly made pronunciation guide:

That is the BEST pronunciation guide I’ve ever seen! lol

@loopylin

oh, i like it!

@raxforge

…What? Lol 😂

Baron is a little delirious rn.

Question Baron just asked in the story I’m writing: “Are an onion a bird or a mammal?” (please excuse his grammar). Things are about to get interesting…

@ellette-giselle

Glad you liked it!

She won’t be in the next story, just warning you, but Max, Ruby, and Rya will be returning. Story after that, Jenna will be returning with Ken.

I have decided to keep Baron in this rp for now.

@theducktator @the_lost-journal

Ok, I’ll try to clear up the confusion then!

For not understanding, I don’t understand the whole set up of a contemporary non-denominational church. There is no structure whatsoever, and it confuses me greatly. XD

As for structure within the service, this is going to depend largely upon the church to be honest. Our…[Read more]

@theducktator

Ok, cool!

What do you mean by structure? Like within the local, individual churches or broadly, like all of them?

@the_lost-journal

I fully believe there isn’t a single human being on this earth who worships Mary.

I mean, like Stephie said, there could be, but I’m not accusing anyone particular of this. I’ve just heard of people treating her that way and wanted to express my opinion on that. : )

@kefa @theducktator

I don’t understand why they don’t dress up…

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@the_lost-journal

I disagree with this a little. You cannot go off JUST the Bible, you need prayer too. And plus others can teach you a lot about God. So no, I do not “just” believe in the Bible.

Well…

Yes, you do need prayer, and God can reveal things to you. But God will NEVER say something to you that contradicts the Bible. If the Bible doe…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh my goodnessssss. I just typed out a super long response to your post, and then Wyoh ate it because I wasn’t signed in. 😭😭

I love these ideas. Thank you so much for all the time you’re putting into this (I love bouncing ideas off of someone! There’s a lot of stuff I haven’t figured out with this.) And I’m glad you like the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Your request has been granted. (You inspired me.)