Beth

@whalekeeper

Heeyy Sara, I’m about a third through your story right now! What kind of critique do you want? Any specific concerns, stuff like that?

Ummmm

Let me think lol

I think I’m just worried about pacing, flow of the story, and if it’s at all interesting lol

And character development ideas would be helpful too!!

I also just want to know t…[Read more]

LILITU’S NICKNAME IS TULIPS???????

Yeah lol

you can thank one of the boys from my school for that one XDXD

The frog wedding is adorable.

I KNOWWWW

YOU KILLED NEVEAH?!?!?!

no comment….

@theducktator

 I just finished your prologue. It’s good, but you overuse italics.

NOOOOOO
IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO USE ITALICS

😱😱😱😱

*sobs hysterically*

Oh my goodness, they kissed!!!!

yesssss

*coughs* um yeah…chapter three is kinda dark I guess 😂😂

@ellette-giselle

Does this mean we won’t get a new section today? 🥺

A possible option for them is to say they prefer worshipping in private, then they’ll obviously worship God and not the idols. But that is pretty close to a lie already and I don’t see that working more than once or twice. Probably the best thing for them to do is to just tell them.

@ellette-giselle

I think it’s fine. They have to, in this instance, instead of just jumping at it when they don’t need to. Since Elishavet was the one who pointed that out, I would wait to see what she thinks, but I think that it’s fine.

@the_lost-journal

How do you say Ahava? Uh-hah-vah? I like it (well, I guess I shouldn’t say that when I don’t know how it’s actually pronounced, but it looks like it would sound pretty 😅). If you like it and can’t think of any particular reasons not to keep it, I’d say go with it.

As for Thomas… hmm… is there a certain style/ethnicity of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yes?

@theshadow

Emery, Colin, Jehan, Girard, Philippe, Lorin, Perrin, Nicolas, Richart and Olivier are French.

Some German ones are Alexander, Konrad, Hermann, Heinrich, Emmerich, Berthold, and Christian.

@savannah_grace2009

Hey girl, sorry I haven’t really read more of your WIP yet.  I’ve been pretty busy (which is why I kind of vanished for a few days). I’ll try to read some more and get you some feedback sometime this week.

Um, yes!! I would love to see aesthetics!! You don’t even have to ask, girl. XD

@theducktator

I need that mug sooo bad!

Me too. I’ll see if I can find it on Amazon or something. I saw the pic on Pinterest but the link led me to a sketchy website so i didn’t get it. I’ll send you the link if I find it!

 Your profile pic is awesome, by the way.

thx. I found it on Pinterest and I might be slightly obsessed with it XD. It’s the…[Read more]

Cool.

I’m curious to see how far this goes.

Do you know Blades of Acktar by Patricia Mingerik? (hopefully I spelled her last name right)

From what you described, it sounds like it might be similar in some ways to that series (great series by the way. She wrote a wonderful fantasy world without magic)

@keilah-h

……some of those seem like they were directed at me

Some of them made me think of you XD Especially the Writer Problem #18 one

I laughed though.

and the tiny froggo is pure gold!!

Good, glad you laughed!

And yes, I love that picture! It was a random Pinterest find

also what’s with your signature?

Lol.

So, Andrew and I got in a frien…[Read more]

I hope I made your day a little brighter!

Ehyeh Flora

And finally, something so sweet <3