@beth-torres
Active 2 weeks, 4 days ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Here’s an RP for the character I wanted to add (he’s Carrie’s twin, she really doesn’t like him for certain reasons).
I’ll write his in third person.
SilasÂ
Carrie would be infuriated if he told her that he was there. Silas had been following the group of people since they’d left the castle, from a far distance, staying out of sight. He didn’t…[Read more]
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I also have another character I’ve wanted to add. I will have to RP him in a little bit, and if it doesn’t make sense with the story then we can take him out of it.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
There a so many typos in that. Sorry.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Okay!
CarrieÂ
Ottoline was unconsious and Snake was still attacking. I avoided Snake’s attacks, still looking for any suspicious creature. Maybe Snake had betrayed us? I felt bad for making the assumption, but that was the first conclusion my mind usually came to about someone when something odd like that happened.
I snatched up…[Read more]
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Carrie could go look for the creature. She isn’t really helping much in this scene.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Is someone going to catch the creature? Cause isn’t it going to keep controlling one person after the next?
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Carrie
At the start of the attack, Fire Face leaped off the elk and began spouting fire.
I grabbed my dagger and almost threw it, then thought twice. My dagger would hit something, immediately turn it to stone and shatter it.
“It’s not me doing this! It’s this animal, it-” Snake shouted.
Animal? After getting out my sword, Â I looked around…[Read more]
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
A rare creature that can take control of a person’s mind? The character being controlled could start attacking, and the other characters think the one is just going crazy but really they’re being controlled????
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Carrie
Along the ride on our big elks, Nahim and Nora began singing, yet I couldn’t tell if it was a song of joy or sorrow.
“What’re you singing?” I asked.
Sorry, I know that was really short and took way longer than a second.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
GEEZ. I DIDNT MEAN TO MAKE IT SO GIGANTIC
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Thanks. Lol
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
There’s my wierd Fire Face drawing
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Encouraging Each Other in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I’ve also been trying to work on not letting the feelings of it take over my decisions. I haven’t looked into anything as far as books that help. Could I have some of the recommendations for books?
It’s pretty much as @hybridlore said about OCD, how it makes the thoughts way more obsessive.
Also, this topic was…[Read more]
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Encouraging Each Other in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I completley relate to what you wrote. I have OCD as well and am working through it in different areas of my life, but when it comes to writing, somedays I just think I need to quit writing altogether because it’s on my mind constantly.Â
I know sometimes I need to calm my brain down from the overload of thoughts, but I used to…[Read more]
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Beth Torres posted a new activity comment 1 year ago
I had put choas. Lol.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Yes. I tries posting Fire Face again. Didn’t work.
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Okay! We can try to do it quick just to continue on in the story in you want.
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