Faith

@vinagirl

Hello! It’s nice to meet you! That’s so cool! The Septrum is a cool name!

Thanks!

it’s awesome that you love math! (Wish I could say the same thing lol 😅)

It’s not everyone’s thing, that’s totally fine, lol!

I depends on what book I’m working on for the soft and hard thing. Some I like to be very flexible with and some have to have so…

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@calyhuge

I love itttt 😏😂

@rae

Yesss, let’s do it! *evil author laugh* That would be so funny. Especially if they learn some sort of ballroom dancing where you change partners throughout. 🤣

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, I get it now! It’s simply the power of resistance and the fact that none of the other Paynes know that they’re being lied to. So Sef will have to confront her lies in a more obvious way than most books.

That makes sense! And yeah, definitely don’t feel like you have to take any of my advice… It’s totally up to you…[Read more]

Also, Felicity is totally showing up with at least half of those banned items

@calyhuge You also forgot to tag me lol

I love the pamphlet and I will have a lot of fun having my teacher character try to make sure everyone follows its ridiculous rules XD

@whalekeeper

Dante

“Dance lessons? I’d rather be attacked by a pixie again.”

Aaaaa I forgot Dante 💀

Dante Tucker

Apperance:

also, he has an English style flat cap that he wears tho I didn’t draw it

Personality: Cocky, very impulsive, bit of a pyromaniac, distrustful yet loyal once won over

Other: an alien, has fireproof skin

@jonas

Welcome to the protection squad, Dalton.

@scoutfinch180

I love those!

Deerfoot has a recognizable design and a clear silhouette, I think. He seems like a cheerful, charismatic guy who’s maybe a bit adventurous and care free? (I can’t focus enough to read the writing rn) Also, I like really like the name Conri, but I think you should also keep Deerfoot as a nickname or something cuz it…[Read more]

@vinagirl

Welcome to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy, and my current project is a universe I’m working on with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (hard meaning concrete rules for the…[Read more]

@vinagirl (Thanks @rae for the tag XD I was super confused until I figured out why you had tagged me separately lol.)

Hi! I’m also a homeschooled Christian girl and oldest child! (Yay! XD) I go by Hybrid on here, and I write science fiction and sometimes dystopian.

It looks like you already got asked a ton of questions, and it’s getting late, so…[Read more]

@vinagirl

Welcome, welcome!

(Now for my proper introduction XD)

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, fiction-writing, homeschooled, God-loving, teen girl!!

I write fantasy and dystopian, and I’ve dabbled a bit in historical and contemporary fiction.

My name is Raegan. I am the oldest of seven children and a lot of…

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@jonas

I think Freedom’s adding a few more charries to the castle.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, wow XD I didn’t even realize it had been so long since this was posted. Sorry, I don’t know why I didn’t see it before, I know you didn’t tag me but I check the recent topics fairly often. I totally get that, but I think in future editing it might make more sense to cut the opening chapters. But it’s totally up to you…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Really cool! So she would know what a horizon is, but isn’t very familiar with an Earthlike one since in her world, she’d be seeing the other planetoids on the more broken-up edge.

Yeah, essentially. Though N’nesha specifically hasn’t even seen that horizon, it’s probably been described to her before.

There’s a planet in Star Wars calle…

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@jonas @whalekeeper @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @rae

@savannah_grace2009

Great job on the outline! I know it’s hard XD I’ve tried to outline my stories before, but tbh I never really got a complete outline.

I feel like the ending is very abrupt, almost. I know it’s meant to be a cliffhanger but it sort of feels like you cut the ending off. Then again, some books are like this so as long as there’s…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I assume N’Nesha lives on some kind of asteroid, and that’s why she’s surprised at the horizon and the fact that there’s only one? (“Omia” is their species’ word for such planetoids, right?)

More or less. It’s not really an asteroid, but it is a field of planetoids. I’ve talked about Omialia many times before, but it’s essentially a…[Read more]

Those two… 🤣

@freedomwriter76

Alrighty! Here it is! (:

Everton

Ev woke with a start. His vision blurred and unblurred until he could finally see clearly. His eyes glanced over the stone walls and the flickering sconces.

Oh… this place again… He had been here before. Wasn’t sure how it had happened, but here he was in this wild castle again.

He mutte…[Read more]