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Loopy replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 hours, 48 minutes ago
@hybridlore Yay!
I can probably come. But there’s a very low chance of me turning on my camera at 8 am.Can’t wait to see everyone!
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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 12 hours, 53 minutes ago
@whalekeeper @rae @koshka This would have been funnier if i had posted it while it was still relevant, but here
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 hours, 55 minutes ago
@mineralizedwritings (Hi! How are you? Haven’t seen you in forever!) @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @liberty @freed_and_redeemed @kyronthearcanin @trailblazer @acancello @anyone-else-i-forgot
Hear ye, hear ye! God willing, t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 hours, 57 minutes ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 13 hours, 5 minutes ago
Alpha is talking specifically about Hypodermic needles and syringes just to make it clear.
Good to know. I was wondering about that. Like what if he needed stitches?
Also I apologize for my character’s rudeness in advance, lol
Dante
Dante’s mouth twitched as he tried to hold back a wry grin.
“Heh. I knew you’d do that.”
He didn’…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 13 hours, 20 minutes ago
just showing more of the city or government, to get a feel of how much the world has changed. Something like that, maybe. Maybe you could have Sara or Cole go to a different area,
Okay! I could always try to integrate that into scenes while they’re traveling (to the church meetings, to their jobs).
Ah, okay. That’s fine if your sti…
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 13 hours, 47 minutes ago
Yussss, it’s working againnnn
Wyoh was being mean to me. : (
How many siblings do you have? I have five, and this is quite accurate. XD
I only have three, but I’ve been around big families and have been in houses with lots of children running around. XD I’m glad I’ve succeeded 😂
Ours is named Fluffy the Beast. XD
No way, that’s…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 13 hours, 50 minutes ago
Bruh…
Ok we’re gonna try this again.
@theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @smiley
Chapter 4
“I haven’t seen Antonio all day… He must not be a sophomore.” Hallie stood on her tiptoes, peering over the heads of the students who roamed the cafeteria.
“You trippin’? I thought you didn’t care that much.” Jennifer pl…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 13 hours, 51 minutes ago
Is this workingggg
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 14 hours, 1 minute ago
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whaley replied to the topic TNPT: The Sword – Outlining in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 14 hours, 55 minutes ago
Overarching Theme. […] What are your thoughts?
This looks good. I’ll note, I feel a bit of a blur between books. (You’re still in the outlining phase so that’s fine.) It’s great that you have his story divided into three areas of growth, but because they’re very similar when it comes to the actions Alan has to take, you need…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 15 hours, 11 minutes ago
Yep, it’s good. :]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 23 hours, 8 minutes ago
@rae Hehehe Alpha has more knives than social skills
Dante
“Oi…” Dante growled. He straightened his posture and crossed his arms. “I might be smaller than you, but I’m tougher than I look. Survived this long. And I don’t have some stupid needle phobia.”
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Loopy replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 4 hours ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 4 hours ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 4 hours ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 4 hours ago
@theducktator Yay! Im glad you’re feeling better. A lot of my friends and family have been sick lately as well. I’ve been pretty lucky that I haven’t gotten anything yet. Tis the season, I guess.
Liko
“Cookies?” Liko raised his eyebrows. “Who doesn’t?”
He paused, trying to remember what he was forgetting. His thoughts had drifted off to…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 5 hours ago
👍
Reading my older RPs kind of pains me. My sister came to my desk and found me clutching my head. XD
Whaat?? I’ve been having so much fun rereading your old stuff. It makes me so cheerful. 🩵 I was keeping myself motivated earlier by looking forward to when Marcel was introduced.
I may be in the same boat as you though when I get to…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 7 hours ago
It looks a lot better! One thing I noticed is that Antonio does say “fabuloso” twice.
“Then the topic conveniently comes up in a conversation with Easton.”
Also, I feel like this might be better if you just change it to “Then I can ask Easton” or something like that. Otherwise, it looks great! I like the way you made Hallie more rea…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 8 hours ago
Turns out, my brother’s cord was broken in three places. This may have happened because of how much he’s grown. Because of the scar tissue around the cord, the fluid is still able to pass through his body safely, and he doesn’t need surgery!
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