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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Felicity
“Alright, well, mission accomplished. You made it to your class. About time I head to mine.”
Fel turned to leave, giving Chase a playful but gentle punch to the shoulder. She winked.
“It was fun hanging out.”
Then she walked out of the field and back to the school buildin…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Me when I lose my spot while archiving this rp and have to scroll back 200+ pages to find it again:

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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃
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Enid replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
That would be lovely, if you please
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Yes, but I may need a few days or so off first. (You’re probably not starting immediately anyway.)
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Enid replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Boom, finally caught up
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Enid replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:
“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”
Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”
Sef blinked hard.
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Enid started the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
Summarize your story in one weird sentence!
It needs to be both accurate and strange at the same time! This is just for fun; I don’t recommend you put this summary on the back of your book. But it takes a dose of creativity.Here’s an example with Lord of the Rings (the summaries can be longer than this): A guy with hairy feet can’t let go of hi…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I would love to!
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot

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Enid replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
Probably either Leon or Julian. I’m going to say Leon for this book.
~ Were there any characters that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
Umm . . . For some reason I’m thinking of Fox, since he was the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
He ended up marrying the daughter of a farmer that he helped. Mercy grew up and married and had children, and so did most of the other children, though their fifth, Allan, died when he was fifteen.
🥺
Thank you!
Also, Linus had a point. We never found out who wrote that note (I know you just said it was an acolyte, but maybe…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
*reads over questions briefly*
Oh, never mind. I see you already added those. 😝
I’m sad that the series is over. This was fun.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay, I’ll try to answer them after I eat breakfast.
Okay, I’m tempted to say something that’ll make y’all kill me.
Lemme guess. Questions for the overarching series or something like that?
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Melissa
“I goeth out of this tunnel… -eth” Mel wiggled the rest of the way out and retrieved her stick, which she had left by the burrow’s entrance. She looked the girl who had just appeared up and down with her flashlight.
“You talk funny. But I like your cape. I’m Mel.”
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m having more fun writing this imp guy than my actual characters lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
MelissaAs Mel followed the rabbit, it began picking up speed, and she found herself jogging to keep up with it.
There was something up ahead. A thin line across the path, reflecting silver in her flashlight beam. Mel slowed slightly, hopped over it, and continued running. Ahead, the rabbit turned suddenly right, and disappeared…[Read more]
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