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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
I want to use was and were less. I’ve noticed this mostly in my essays. I’ll write sentences like he was, or this was, and in my last essay I eliminated a lot of those, and it sounded a lot better.
I want to get better at worldbuilding. That’s something that always gets neglected in my stories. I generally just make stuff up as I go along, but…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
I love it sooo much!!! They’re so cute!
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Enid replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
Tagging some people to make them aware of this area on KP!
@mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @rae @godlyfantasy12 @theshadow @princesachronicle22
Y’all are also free to answer last week’s question if you like.
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Enid started the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 6 months ago
How do you want to improve?
(To be clear, choose a couple writing skills you want to improve, or a bad habit, and explain!)I’m pretty good at writing things in an abnormal way (such as strange metaphors), but I don’t think abnormality is definitely, certainly, indubitably good. It can be confusing. It’s often detail-oriented, without giving the…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
I think the rough sketch looks really good, regardless of whether it’s accurate. I like the shirt folds. (I cannot figure out cloth for the life of me.)
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Enid replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh my goodness I have been trying to log into KP
Oh nooo, Wyoh is banishing you too? I haven’t had any problems, so maybe I’m a ghost whisperer.
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Enid replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
*is in bliss*
XD I was pretty satisfied too. While drawing, that is.
The harder or darker a line, the more shadow I expect it to be in. If it is light and slightly broken, I expect it to be in direct light or even a glare.
Ooohh, how did I not think of this?? That is a very good point, thank you. I suppose it might help if I fill…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
AAHH it looks so good!!! I love how you did the hair texture!!
That’s definitely a good representation of her. And it didn’t take you very long either, that’s crazy. <3
I don’t even know why. I think it was trying to kill me or something.
So you risked your life on my behalf. 🤣 Thank you so much. <3
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Jaybird replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
This is a great idea! I often am in need of a little troubleshooting, but am not sure how to proceed.
*sees clean gesture drawing*
*is in bliss*
I have no experience in digital art, so I’m no help there. Love the proportion guide though. I need to do more of those…
I guess for design stuff, try to view…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Ah! Hi, Lois! Your sister is intense. XD Alyona and Nadian are roughly her age, but the girls are homeschooled currently. They weren’t ready to attend another school. And they’re definitely behind her in grades. They do need developing, though.
Having the boys in the same first class sounds like a plan to me. @whalekeeper what do you think?
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.
Same. XD
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Just curious, what’s with your current signature? The other mother never said that… Also she’s a creepy villainous monster…
Sorry, I’m just confused lol
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
DO IT! THIS IS SO COOL!
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Putting another character in here
Lois
“Hey, Brea,” Lois said after finding his sister’s hiding spot in the library. She turned around in her chair to face him, looking surprised.
“I just got Mother’s letter saying you were coming. Why she didn’t bother to use the telephone is beyond me. How are you doing?”…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Liko
“Mandatory?” Liko scratched his chin thoughtfully. “I doubt it. How can you have fun at a party you’re forced to go to? Though, I wouldn’t know for sure. I’m just the janitor.” He cringed inwardly, thinking about giant mess he’d have to help clean up in the ballroom later that night.
“Why? Scared to go?”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
@rae Aww Chase 🙁 The twins would have visited him in the hospital, but they didn’t know that he was there and they didn’t have much time to wonder about him.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
They’re called the Imprecatory Psalms. Psalms 59 and 83 for example.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago

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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
Like how in the first Catechism it said it was okay to pray for the death of your enemies… what..?
Some of the Psalms are like that, so I wouldn’t say it’s never true. Most of the time it is best to pray for their repentance though.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
Could you all pray for our piano competition? My brother is playing today, which is about a week earlier than he expected, and he found this out Tuesday. I don’t think he’s ever had a perfect run through, and his category has to be memorized. I play two songs next week, not memorized, but I was only assigned one of my pieces a month ago, and then…[Read more]
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