Ava Blue

Probably the hardest thing to avoid in writing, EVER:

I really want to read his stuff. His lectures on world building and plot are MinD-BlOWinG

@freedomwriter76

Anyone can go next!

Thank lol. He doesn’t like it when people are like WoW yOuR GeTtInG sO tAlL

and then he’s actually proud of it 🤣

I’d say, concerning the Shifters, just have ‘Shifter’ be the race, and consider the different animals they shift into as subspecies.

Subspecies: “A category in biological classification that ranks just below a species and includes a physically recognizable and geographically separate group of individuals whose members can breed successfully with…[Read more]

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22

So this is a really big and deep fountain, right? I’m imagining it being pretty deep.

Ellie

“Serin!” Ellie shouted as her companion collapsed to the ground.

Ellie and Allen rushed over and knelt down beside her. Ellie reached for her injured arm, but hesitated. She wasn’t sure how to remove…[Read more]

@loopylin

Thanks! : D

@mineralizedwritings

Oh, I just saw your rp too. Everly and Layson are so cute!

@princesachronicle22

That was so cool! Now I want to see a scene with Serin and Kun’en fighting together

Okay so I’m still working on my action scenes, and if y’all see anything that you think I can improve on or any tips to help it flow better, that would be awesome!

Honestly, I feel like I need some tips from you. That was so much fun to read.

@keilah-h @loopylin @princesachronicle22

Layson looks up as Serin severs the beast with a final blow. Adrenaline pumps through his viens, making his head feel heavy. Serin collapses to the side. Layson runs one hand through his hair, then looks down in disgust at his bloody forearm. He clenches his teeth as the fresh scrapes from the creatures…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! I’m the same, I like learning by myself so online works great.

@thearcaneaxiom

yeah… I hate proofs XDXD

I have literally no idea! XD I just remember when she couldn’t find somebody to watch my sis and I so we sat in the back of the classroom doing sticker gems lol. The students looked so big and scary 😬 Oh and her college had cool chairs to spin in. That was kinda all that mattered to me at the time so…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Honestly so glad you guys like it too 🤣 hopefully my future readers feel the same XD

@freedomwriter76

lol I can’t even remember where you had that scene with Riker because I read it in my email…

but I love it! I mean I assume he’s got some more obstacles…

Him getting dizzy… so sad!! But the whole scene was great XD

@godlyfantasy12

HMMMM

I think I understand what you’re saying but I’m not exactly sure so bear with me. XD

Sooo…

Do you know the scientific naming classification (can’t think of the name) we have in real life for creatures? That might help some.
Other than that I’d say like within the species of shifters there would be sub-groups for what…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank you so much!!! ❤️❤️❤️

You’re welcome! =D

Lol…sorry about that, but I’m afraid I do not have a solution!!! 😂😂😂

XD Riker remains highschool/college age for life XD Oh well.

@godlyfantasy12

Ok so I don’t know a whole lot about this in terms of worldbuilding…

but that being said from a birdwatchers perspective you have a new species when they are too genetically different to interbreed. Sometimes there are certain color differences (or perhaps behavior) depending on the region, to the extent most bird guides will…[Read more]

@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise

Thanks guys! Glad you all think it’s sweet 😀

And yes, Jonathan is like one of the most respectable charries I have XD

@thercaneaxiom

Sorry, but proofs are the bane of my existence XDXD

Because I never got a chance to understand the basics of what they are built off of, I tend to think of them as the one question I’ll get wrong on the quiz.. but I still get an 80% and it’s only five points, so yeah I don’t bother LOL. Just the way it works these days I guess……[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

AWWW Poor Everly and Kaine!!! But they’re so sweet together XD

*my respect for Jonathan goes up*