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@esther-c

Oooo I really like that scene! =D
However I don’t have any feedback/suggestions for you right now, sorry.

@princesachronicle22

AH I MUST READ MORE XD
What creature is Anwyn?
sorry I don’t have feedback/suggestions for you either

Oh, and @esther-c , I just read your scene and I really liked it! The sunrise description was really pretty.

@princesachronicle22

That was really cool to read! Are you going to post more? I’m curious to see what the rock thing is. Also, Anwyn giving everyone nicknames was hilarious.

@joy-calle

Could I have your email pls? I can do instagram too.

I saw the email thing on your website, but it won’t let me see it unless I sign in, and windows seems to have some questionable things it wants to do… (let it basically do anything it wants with my account? Like no excuse me? XD)

@ligtoverdarkness6

Thanks!

@esther-c

ok, I’ll keep that in mind. The first book actually refers to something different from the other ones, the term afterthoughts is used to refer to a unwanted group of people, where as the other one literally mean thoughts. So maybe I should change it to m=not have parallel titles and instead have…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Ok yeah, that’s what it looks like. It sounds like the checklist is for what you would need to get published though, so lol I’m a little confused XD

And same! I might try to do some this summer, it seems like fun!

@mineralizedwritings

Looks like you have to get at least three works of that type published (three short stories, three articles, three poems). So it’s like an elite club! I am 100% writing articles or short stories this summer.

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter

Lo and behold, I hath ariveth! From whence I came I canna tell an to where I go tha na cratur canna…

Ok, I don’t know how the Florid Sword turned into Donal Grant, but the point is that I am here for the moment, and I offer my apologies for my absence.

(Note: HAVE ANY OF Y’ALL READ SIR GIBBIE BY GEORGE…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

IKR? SO COOL! XD I want to see the short story checklist, idk why I can’t click it, I suppose it’s because it hasn’t launched yet?

@princesachronicle22

The first part was good! I don’t really read stuff that goes into that much detail about peoples torment XD So I stopped reading, but I’m sure it was great. Love your writing style btw!

DID YOU GUYS SEE THE… THE NEW KINGDOM PEN THING?!?

Every time there’s something new, I hyperventilate XD

@Thearcaneaxiom

Thanks! And thanks for the feedback 😀:)

@princesachronicle22

Thanks!!

@thearcaneaxiom @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @felicity

I’ve been thinking about the order of my books, how would this sound for titles?

Afterthoughts of Hate

Afterthoughts of a Releaser

Afterthoughts of The Left Behind

(Haven’t come up with a good title for the fourth yet…)

Honest opinions? Does it…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Ah! Serin! No! Her father seems terrible. 😡 You should add him to the castle so I can have one of my charries beat him up.

@acancello

Nice! I would say it’s better, but the restaurant scene could have worked with some changes too.

I staggered over to an almond tree that was bent into the shape of a seat that was covered in moss and fallen flower petals and sunk down on it breathing hard.

I would make that sentence separated into two, it’s a little long.

@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 Aw, I love Steve. He’s being all sweet and friendly despite everyone in the room distrusting him. ❤️

Eddie

Despite Adolphus’ assurances, the girl, Arabella, and the boy still seemed wary. Eddie tried her best to wipe the scowl off her face.

Why am I so moody? When’s the last time I slept? Th…[Read more]

@artsy-dragon

Very cool! I like the person!

@power What did you do with the sorry remains?? Commit them to the wing-wheeled heavens?